sadam Posted January 19, 2004 Share Posted January 19, 2004 could i have some feedback of some of my pics?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymity1 Posted January 19, 2004 Share Posted January 19, 2004 No shit you can, but you have to have pics first..... And I dont think creating your own thread will help you any. You will still get hated on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted January 19, 2004 Share Posted January 19, 2004 im postin the pic for him cos he doesnt know how.....im gonna teach him but im just posting this one pic for him.....there will be more soon i belive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted January 19, 2004 Share Posted January 19, 2004 Originally posted by anonymity1 No shit you can, but you have to have pics first..... And I dont think creating your own thread will help you any. You will still get hated on. come on man......if he was better you wouldnt say that........i understand ther wasnt a pic to comment on......now there is so why not be nice eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destruction by Definition Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 those letters arent too bad, work on that handsteez.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Originally posted by Destruction by Definition those letters arent too bad, work on that handsteez.. yeah, they are simple, and thats dope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiseguy Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 dgk skateboards logo is that character original or copied? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
26SidedCube Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 I've got something I wanna say, but I'm not going to. Keep at it. :dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest soneMILWwi Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 what the hell?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Originally posted by Destruction by Definition those letters arent too bad, work on that handsteez.. hmmmm ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bless561 Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 u couldnt think of a better name? thats a really stupid name and its not funny or watever and kinda of fending you have drawing skillz dont watse it on fucking sadam just my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 Shit pictures check these pics out, handstyles, trains etc could i have your feedback:dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 TRAIN TRAIN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 more pics http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86be2bd249a20000001610'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Unless your real name is "Stefano Maria Baratti", you bit that character straight from here: http://arscomica.org/pix2/saddam2.jpg'> http://arscomica.org/saddam2.html And that last picture isn't a train so don't call it one. Otherwise keep practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 yer, i bit it....i didnt claim to have made it up myself and this is PAPER CHASE, and they are plans of trains, so still trains Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 You didn't claim not to have made it up either, which usually implies that you did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 THROW UP http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86bfa4c129220000001610'> this is a throw i done in 5 mins..........probably not very good, could i have some feedback?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 PLEASE CAN I HAVE SOME FEEDBACK I NEED IT:lol: SO PLEASE, BE GENEROUS WITH YOUR FEEDBACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatbastard Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 ok i understand your just starting....and i like the fact that you have kept your shit simple and havent gone all wildstyle. but it seems like you have gone a little to simple, my advice would be to not add any extensions as your letters would still classify as throwup letters for now. The "S" the end bit (where it finishes) is just a chunk of nothing perhaps make this smaller or bend it down put some style in the letter without adding any extensions. you have put short lines in the A and D why? theres so much stuff you can put there...a star maybe? question marks? (all been done a lot but its better than a line. 3D/drop shadow? where is it? why dont you have one? why did you colour the gaps of the M black? dont get comfortable with bottom ups, you need to practise floaters, your not always going to be painting trains are you? how are you gonna rock letters on an actual wall? i never do this but im feeling generous tonight. http://clarke_taylor.250free.com/sadam.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86b8457d88930000001610'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 FEEDBACK thanksfor the advice, now i can see what you mean about the letters on the dubs, too much extensions, just leading into nothing but i think i will keep the same handstyle because its an unusual style and looks fresh, on my next piece i will try and keep your edvice in mind..............:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatbastard Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 also with the camo fill one, its a litle unacurate...maybe go look at a camo fill to try and get a feel for the sizing and structure of the camo shapes. and get a feel for what colours to put next to each other. perhaps you could use markers as opposed to pencils? you will get a much more solid fill. colour schemes could also be improved on, meybe do another outline colour but black? add a few colours in the fill? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 i will also try to use markers, but i am skint at the moment so i havent been able to get my hands on any that work........ but thanks for the advice, helped me out alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maekr Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 why dont you change your name to "sad?" because, that shit's pretty sad. why would you wanna write sadam. isn't it already written on everything in iraq. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 new throw up!!!! http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86baaa6688ff0000001610'> :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Re: new throw up!!!! Originally posted by sadam http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86baaa6688ff0000001610'> :lol: not bad, just clean it up some......dont write sadam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86ba475b491c0000001610'> http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86ba4730c8470000001610'> http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86ba4700c8770000001610'> http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df01b3127cce86ba47f0c8870000001610'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadam Posted January 20, 2004 Author Share Posted January 20, 2004 check out the latest throwups i have added, and one weird one..........PLZ, CAN I HAVE SOME FEEDBACK!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elunikoparke Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 can everyone plz stop responding to this guy.. what i have learned through this time of tryin to define a style.. is that u have to do it on ur own. if some one tells u that it looks wack, that is there opinion. but this kid is asking for feed back.. but u see no signs of improvement. so i suggest u keep writing.. and others stop caring.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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