Comp Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 http://comp.me0w.net/art/confused.jpg'> http://comp.me0w.net/art/girl.jpg'> and some letters.. http://comp.me0w.net/art/greys.jpg'> constructive critisism is appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Mulder Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 the middle character is good...it looks like you know what your doing with the letters but i'm not really feeling it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlton Banks Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 your getting better young man. Don't waste all your markers on your background. Unless doing a interesting piece or something. Your characters look too much like, "Sabrina the animated series," stuff. Try sketching with pencil alot, then you will develop your own character style. But you are getting better my boy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jus Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 that girly character is tight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlton Banks Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//biggrin.gif'> ------------------ http://www.yourphotos.com/users/2915/Carlton.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poop Man Bob Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 I personally like the background on the first drawing. Very nice. And I enjoy your letters ... post more sketches if you have them. ------------------ Toilets are for the uninspired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steadycreepin Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 i like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brown twinkie Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just my opinion, which doesn't mean shit..... keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOE-FOO Posted July 14, 2001 Share Posted July 14, 2001 your letters are getting better , in a weird fucked up sorta way.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
24/7/365 Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 Stop using a ruler, and if you dont use one then you have pretty good lines, but put some curves into the letters, the ruler effect doesnt kick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
24/7/365 Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 how long have you been writing ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest platapie Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 the letters are kinda kool if they are done as huge blockbuster type things. im not really feelign the charcters ethier. but what the hell do i no? im just a hawaiian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comp Posted July 15, 2001 Author Share Posted July 15, 2001 first someone asked for more pics so here are some.. http://comp.me0w.net/art/character.jpg'> http://comp.me0w.net/art/micah.jpg'> http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'> http://comp.me0w.net/art/toy.jpg'> And to answer the other questions, no i don't use a ruler, and i've only been writing since january but i've been drawing for a lot longer. I appreciate your input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*see-phore* Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 that girl look loose.......hook me up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KONG 42 Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 GAY!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xeroshoes Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 impalasaurus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devilsMESnger Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 very unoriginal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolical Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 Very very impressive!Pretty unreal to tell yoo the truth!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheWhiteRabbit Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 nice, good drawings dude. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B_As_In_Bot Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'> I really liked these letters a lot more, but its not so much about the letter, I like the placement. It would look really good painted, the dimensions really kick ass. Impressive type of backround, It looks sloppy (in a good way),it also shows energy and stimulation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DankLordz Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 since january? hah, i fucking quit. ------------------ "pound the shit out of all that control the masses of their rightful sanity..designate the powers of intrusion...grade a plot- bury all authority." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
6000 Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 Originally posted by brown twinkie: please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just my opinion, which doesn't mean shit..... keep at it. i agree with what he says about that bboy look being played. its just like, whats the point of wasting all your creative energy drawing something that couldnt be distinguished between a million generic artists. in the music biz, generic shit sells, and the "artists" in turn make loot. but here, i doubt your motive is one of financial gain. i think more people should just let loose what is inside their heads, and stop worrying so much about trying to make it look "graf". on the positive side, i think you definitely have artistic ability, and i would love to see what you might come up with just off the dome. ------------------ 6K sick. skay. :sbc::watp::dab: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
6000 Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 ...and i wish that girl was real. too cute. ------------------ 6K sick. skay. :sbc::watp::dab: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stiches Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 it's ok ------------------ six deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest unkyunksalot Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 do you have letter influences? i like the characters but im not so sure about the poetry. im more of a hai ku man myself burn ing ur eth ra why does it hurt me so much may be its the clap. thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ammo Posted July 15, 2001 Share Posted July 15, 2001 the first caracter is really well done but the face is a little too japanimation for me.. most of the other shit is pretty fresh though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlton Banks Posted July 16, 2001 Share Posted July 16, 2001 Getting better my good man. The background on the 5th flik, is PLATINUM. ------------------ http://www.yourphotos.com/users/2915/Carlton.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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