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Eyes need us to see, hearts need us to bleed...

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by Comp, Jul 14, 2001.

  1. Comp

    Comp 12oz Senior Member

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    Eyes need us to see, hearts need us to bleed...

    Discussion started by Comp - Jul 14, 2001

    http://comp.me0w.net/art/confused.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/girl.jpg'>

    and some letters..
    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/greys.jpg'>

    constructive critisism is appreciated
     
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  2. Fox Mulder

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    Fox Mulder - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    the middle character is good...it looks like you know what your doing with the letters but i'm not really feeling it.
     
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  3. Carlton Banks

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    Carlton Banks - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    your getting better young man. Don't waste all your markers on your background. Unless doing a interesting piece or something. Your characters look too much like, "Sabrina the animated series," stuff. Try sketching with pencil alot, then you will develop your own character style. But you are getting better my boy.
     
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  4. jus

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    jus - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    that girly character is tight...
     
  5. Carlton Banks

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    Carlton Banks - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//biggrin.gif'>

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    [img]http://www.yourphotos.com/users/2915/Carlton.jpg'>
     
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  6. Poop Man Bob

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    Poop Man Bob - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    I personally like the background on the first drawing. Very nice. And I enjoy your letters ... post more sketches if you have them.

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  7. steadycreepin

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    steadycreepin - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    i like em
     
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  8. brown twinkie

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    brown twinkie - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have
    honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are
    really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get
    rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just
    my opinion, which doesn't mean shit.....
    keep at it.
     
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  9. TOE-FOO

    TOE-FOO New Jack

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    TOE-FOO - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    your letters are getting better , in a weird fucked up sorta way..
     
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  10. 24/7/365

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    24/7/365 - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    Stop using a ruler, and if you dont use one then you have pretty good lines, but put some curves into the letters, the ruler effect doesnt kick.
     
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    24/7/365 - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    how long have you been writing
    ?
     
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  12. platapie

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    platapie - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    the letters are kinda kool if they are done as huge blockbuster type things. im not really feelign the charcters ethier. but what the hell do i no? im just a hawaiian.
     
  13. Comp

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    Comp - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    first someone asked for more pics so here are some..

    http://comp.me0w.net/art/character.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/micah.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/toy.jpg'>

    And to answer the other questions, no i don't use a ruler, and i've only been writing since january but i've been drawing for a lot longer. I appreciate your input.
     
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  14. *see-phore*

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    *see-phore* - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    that girl look loose.......hook me up!
     
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  15. KONG 42

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    KONG 42 - Replied Jul 14, 2001

    GAY!!!!!!
     
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