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Eyes need us to see, hearts need us to bleed...

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by Comp, Jul 14, 2001.

  1. Comp

    Comp Senior Member

    Joined: Mar 22, 2001 Messages: 2,134 Likes Received: 0
    http://comp.me0w.net/art/confused.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/girl.jpg'>

    and some letters..
    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/greys.jpg'>

    constructive critisism is appreciated
     
  2. Fox Mulder

    Fox Mulder 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Nov 23, 2000 Messages: 12,434 Likes Received: 85
    the middle character is good...it looks like you know what your doing with the letters but i'm not really feeling it.
     
  3. Carlton Banks

    Carlton Banks Member

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 278 Likes Received: 0
    your getting better young man. Don't waste all your markers on your background. Unless doing a interesting piece or something. Your characters look too much like, "Sabrina the animated series," stuff. Try sketching with pencil alot, then you will develop your own character style. But you are getting better my boy.
     
  4. jus

    jus Guest

    that girly character is tight...
     
  5. Carlton Banks

    Carlton Banks Member

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 278 Likes Received: 0
    http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//biggrin.gif'>

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    [img]http://www.yourphotos.com/users/2915/Carlton.jpg'>
     
  6. Poop Man Bob

    Poop Man Bob Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Nov 16, 2000 Messages: 10,259 Likes Received: 18
    I personally like the background on the first drawing. Very nice. And I enjoy your letters ... post more sketches if you have them.

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    Toilets are for the uninspired.
     
  7. steadycreepin

    steadycreepin Member

    Joined: Jun 29, 2001 Messages: 252 Likes Received: 0
  8. brown twinkie

    brown twinkie Veteran Member

    Joined: Jan 6, 2001 Messages: 8,127 Likes Received: 0
    please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have
    honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are
    really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get
    rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just
    my opinion, which doesn't mean shit.....
    keep at it.
     
  9. TOE-FOO

    TOE-FOO New Jack

    Joined: May 10, 2001 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    your letters are getting better , in a weird fucked up sorta way..
     
  10. 24/7/365

    24/7/365 New Jack

    Joined: May 20, 2001 Messages: 50 Likes Received: 0
    Stop using a ruler, and if you dont use one then you have pretty good lines, but put some curves into the letters, the ruler effect doesnt kick.
     
  11. 24/7/365

    24/7/365 New Jack

    Joined: May 20, 2001 Messages: 50 Likes Received: 0
    how long have you been writing
    ?
     
  12. platapie

    platapie Guest

    the letters are kinda kool if they are done as huge blockbuster type things. im not really feelign the charcters ethier. but what the hell do i no? im just a hawaiian.
     
  13. Comp

    Comp Senior Member

    Joined: Mar 22, 2001 Messages: 2,134 Likes Received: 0
    first someone asked for more pics so here are some..

    http://comp.me0w.net/art/character.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/micah.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'>

    [img]http://comp.me0w.net/art/toy.jpg'>

    And to answer the other questions, no i don't use a ruler, and i've only been writing since january but i've been drawing for a lot longer. I appreciate your input.
     
  14. *see-phore*

    *see-phore* Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 7, 2001 Messages: 1,182 Likes Received: 0
    that girl look loose.......hook me up!
     
  15. KONG 42

    KONG 42 Member

    Joined: Dec 7, 2000 Messages: 936 Likes Received: 0
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