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err... one of my sketches

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by FLIP87, Nov 27, 2003.

  1. FLIP87

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    err... one of my sketches

    Discussion started by FLIP87 - Nov 27, 2003

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    ok diss it critisize it take a crap on it i need to know how to imporve
     
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  2. Ckit

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    Ckit - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    lose the stuff on the left of the f and try to make your bars on the letters match up. work on your 3d. yeah, those are the biggest problems i see, at least you didnt try to connnect the letters.
     
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  3. FLIP87

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    FLIP87 - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    great more more more!
    and i noticed people make mistakes by trying to connect the letters when they dont know how to
     
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  4. nightagger

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    nightagger - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    well first things first when you do 3d use a vanishing point....its a lot easier and it looks a lot better...and in my opinion it would look a lot better if all the bars in tha letters were the same width...it just flows a lot better

    and im not sayin you bit this but i got a flip hoody and the letters on the hoody looks awfully close to yurs and like i said im not sayin you bit it but i was just lettin ya now
     
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    JuelzSantana - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    QUIT WHILE NO1 KNOWS WHO U R:lol:
     
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  6. FLIP87

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    FLIP87 - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    hoody?
    edit: oh you mean tthe sk8 company i looked at theyr font and i thought it didnt look anything like it
     
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    theKEENone - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    ok..

    well, to start off, i think you have an alright idea of how to backround stuff, though it still needs alot of work. your letters look very uhm, unkempt, if thats the word....they look almost like you took like three seconds to draw that....be patient, take your time. fool around with alot of different things, and once you get the cleanliness down. u can pretty much get good letters from there on out.

    but over all, WORK ON LETTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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  8. shaderator!

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    shaderator! - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    just keep it up...
     
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    StarzAbove - Replied Nov 27, 2003

    Keep practicing everyone is eager to piece!
     
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