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err... one of my sketches

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by FLIP87, Nov 27, 2003.

  1. FLIP87

    FLIP87 New Jack

    Joined: Nov 26, 2003 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
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    ok diss it critisize it take a crap on it i need to know how to imporve
     
  2. Ckit

    Ckit Member

    Joined: Mar 10, 2003 Messages: 725 Likes Received: 1
    lose the stuff on the left of the f and try to make your bars on the letters match up. work on your 3d. yeah, those are the biggest problems i see, at least you didnt try to connnect the letters.
     
  3. FLIP87

    FLIP87 New Jack

    Joined: Nov 26, 2003 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    great more more more!
    and i noticed people make mistakes by trying to connect the letters when they dont know how to
     
  4. nightagger

    nightagger Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 17, 2003 Messages: 130 Likes Received: 0
    well first things first when you do 3d use a vanishing point....its a lot easier and it looks a lot better...and in my opinion it would look a lot better if all the bars in tha letters were the same width...it just flows a lot better

    and im not sayin you bit this but i got a flip hoody and the letters on the hoody looks awfully close to yurs and like i said im not sayin you bit it but i was just lettin ya now
     
  5. JuelzSantana

    JuelzSantana Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 29, 2003 Messages: 1,020 Likes Received: 18
    QUIT WHILE NO1 KNOWS WHO U R:lol:
     
  6. FLIP87

    FLIP87 New Jack

    Joined: Nov 26, 2003 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    hoody?
    edit: oh you mean tthe sk8 company i looked at theyr font and i thought it didnt look anything like it
     
  7. theKEENone

    theKEENone New Jack

    Joined: Oct 19, 2003 Messages: 28 Likes Received: 0
    ok..

    well, to start off, i think you have an alright idea of how to backround stuff, though it still needs alot of work. your letters look very uhm, unkempt, if thats the word....they look almost like you took like three seconds to draw that....be patient, take your time. fool around with alot of different things, and once you get the cleanliness down. u can pretty much get good letters from there on out.

    but over all, WORK ON LETTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. shaderator!

    shaderator! Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 5, 2003 Messages: 245 Likes Received: 0
  9. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,133 Likes Received: 6
    Keep practicing everyone is eager to piece!
     
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