Guest WebsterUno Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 …Im asking for advice, please help. BTW…this isnt my only style. Ive already painted something a little more toned down, but I want to bust this. I would like an honest opinion, go ahead, I can take it. Thanx. http://imagep.webphotos.iwon.com//1000020932/1000020932_1130200182135PM0.3053858.jpg'> I will post a few more later. maybe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 why dont you post em in the right topic, bastard!! just kidding... good to see you back homeboy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boring Bastard Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 Webs from New Zealand?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WebsterUno Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 *believe* ¡Hola! Because I dont think one sketch belongs in the bench. Im asking you, my comrades, for advice, and maybe some critism. thanx. …hoebag. JK ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest beardo Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 i cant say anything immediately jumps out at me, but i can say im not really feeling the curls at the tip sof your E and S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztek4two1 Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 Originally posted by beardo i cant say anything immediately jumps out at me, but i can say im not really feeling the curls at the tip sof your E and S same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ervothemad7 Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 The outline is cool. Go for yours. The sketch does look og. Yo if anyone ever says your stuff looks like someone else tell them to go %$#@^ themselves, and than ask them were they where in 1972. Were everything you see today spun off from...... Toreone.....Our Thing Inc.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Harry Potter Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 something says dabs from montreal, but not too loudly so rock on brother.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Rage- Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 ^^^^ What a crappy name ^^^^ *cough*sell-out*cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 http://www.netgoth.org.uk/people/4775.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willy Wonker Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 Do these? Hmmm..... http://www.yourphotos.com/users/6990/Resize053.jpg'> These? http://www.yourphotos.com/users/6990/Resize052.jpg'> Peace dunnys... ----->Willy tbC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 5th wheel Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 those last two if anything look like kwaze.att...if anything....but i think there fine...very "piecey" looking...if you know what i mean' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PacRimJob Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 get rid of the unnecessary doodads. they make the letters look gay. the letters themselves, are alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ctrl+alt+del Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 the B just looks awkward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrustUGN Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 any letters that you do ... they have already been done by someone. unless you completely transcend from what "typical" graffiti looks like.. it is not original.. this goes for myself and everyone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrustUGN Posted December 1, 2001 Share Posted December 1, 2001 example... http://www.yourphotos.com/users/5790/trustbb00.jpg'> ... im sure everyone here could come up with about 10 writers who have something similar to this... but i was just sitting there and this came out. not biting.. just drawing. peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cese Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 the s looks pretty nice but im just not feelin the w e and b, just paint and see what comes out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Amuser Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 It's not bad. You need to work on your arrows. Also - you've got rounded edges on some bits, and sharp corners on others. Pick one and it'll look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedScarlet Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 Thta web shit is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ammo Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 personly, i dont like the W and E.and the curls on top of shit hella dont go with the rest of the sketch. lose the curls and it would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wakassOATH Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 Originally posted by Harry Potter something says dabs from montreal, but not too loudly so rock on brother.... hmm it reminded me of dabs too . but i think thats cause of the high point of your B thats reminding me, whatever its in no way of a bite as far as i can tell .. i like it :) :) :) and i wish i could draw :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hushwon Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 :D ima have to o with my dude tuster on that one....right on:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilistic Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 Originally posted by Amuser It's not bad. You need to work on your arrows. Also - you've got rounded edges on some bits, and sharp corners on others. Pick one and it'll look better. yesyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jus Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 i think webs need to work on his letters but its a nice style... im really feelin you sketches wonk i love your style its tight same with the trust... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest imported_Tesseract Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 See...? Thats what i really dont like, critisism made with good intention (no doubt about that). But tottaly useless. You cant really say much on how a sketch could be better, i mean what if 'the arrows need some more work'? The whole style suffers from the same 'disease' for everyone of us. If your arrows are a bit adamant so will the letters. Unless you bite your letters, but this isnt the case here. So what do i have to say? Well, i see that in everysketch there is a letter that kinda 'slips' the whole style, exept the first colored one, I'm talking about the R in the first, the O in the pink wonk and the T in the yellow TRC which leads me to say that i really like the TRC as it is. It seems that what can be pointed as a 'fault' maybe something that aint working at the moment but will look very fresh when it comes correct. So whats the point of critisism? as i see it you must first examine what you see and not point out what you would fix (its not your sketch) you must see what could evolve to something and support it. To end this delirium; i like them. They might not be the most original things i've seen but i cant say that for my self either. We all struggle to reach the point where 'our' style will come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ASER1NE Posted December 2, 2001 Share Posted December 2, 2001 sorry bro but it pretty ugly to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I_Love_Freights Posted December 3, 2001 Share Posted December 3, 2001 Asking for criticisms one sketches seems rather pointless to me. Perhaps itas just my style and personal painting ways, but my sketches NEVER come out looking like my peices. I always change my burners as I paint them, the sketch is simply a small idea of what i'm doing. Too many ideas come into my head as i put the burner up on a wall, or train, or whatever it is im painting. The whole idea of doing the same peice of artwork, exactly the same, twice, seems dilute to me. I prefer to do something slightly different each time when it comes to seperating from outside mediums and paper. artfag alert. ... meep meep. no, its not me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest YinzerXpress Posted December 3, 2001 Share Posted December 3, 2001 shit looks cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
billz$$ Posted December 3, 2001 Share Posted December 3, 2001 Originally posted by ASER1NE sorry bro but it pretty ugly to me THIS IS ONLY 1 PERSONS THOUGHTS I M FEELIN THAT SHIT. "HOW U GOING 2 START SHIT WITH THE SHIT STARTER.-SPICE 1":eek: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceasroni Posted December 3, 2001 Share Posted December 3, 2001 My take on sketchin is do something different everytime..dont keep 1 style your whole life. It gets boring after a while. Alot of the stuff i do is def influenced by others. Im likin this sketch myslef. People are sayin the B looks out of place..im feelin that B, because it doesnt really go along with the others. Stuff that mite look bad to people can look good to others, its not that it is wak, its different, and im feelin this sketch. If this sketch doesnt look good to a person, what the hell, waht is graffiti supposed to look like? My take on graff is to try and get new styles everytime..peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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