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Basically he's saying you aren't good. What is to not understand?

I like the colors and fills and even the D and first E are decent. The idea of the blade cutting the log is nice, but the log looks like an O not E and overall it doesnt flow so well together.

The character scene and the next page is funny.

Keep with it tho, you'll progress.

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Originally posted by swiss cheese

Basically he's saying you aren't good. What is to not understand?

 

not necesarilly..im just sayin that there are much better people out there to ask to do things for dj's and ads and what not,,,im not sayin you are bad, just that your skillz dont seem like someone should be askin you for that,,,,ya know? you dont ask a brand new doctor to do heart surgery.....ya get it?

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is slerm one of your pen names?!

if so you might want to drop it. not sure what it means but its too much like sperm and like the word sperm, it sorta' has one of those mental attachments that doesnt seem very apealling(whatever its meaning).

 

 

...nevermind, if you like it go on and roll with it.

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p.s.- pick out a letter that you like in that first piece... stare at it, find out what it is that you like about it and apply that to a complete alphabet. its a technique that will pay off later. it helps with making a piece look more uniform. dont mind these kids to much in here, even the best writers are continuously trying to push there styles into something better. it just so happens that your at the bottom and theyre

not. its just another hurtle... give yourself some time.

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