kan Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/devil.jpg'> http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soy_oneline.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 um... its not very good try posting some other stuff cuz that stuff pretty weak... my opinion may not be very valid due to the fact that im still a toy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timemachine Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 meh i dun really liek em much but man u got potential, just keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 simple of course your opinion matters im not one of those people who go off on people just cause they dont like their stuffhttp://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soy_peice.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 well that one liner aint bad. good job. your character is a bit off tho, develop him more, detail, make him less full-out cartoon. dont make the lines so sketch, you know? cleaner. go cleaner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 i see what your saying about my char and before anyone says anything i know my hand is disgusting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 doodles http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/doodles.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 some of the top writers dont have a fresh hand, some got it some dont. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfamousOne Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 stop writing or ill kill your pets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 the 1st character and 1liner is dope...i wanna see that 1liner painted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 i have it up just dont have a digi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 invest in one immediatly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CIPHER_one Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 good start, just keep at it. That's the best advice. This early on you're not gonna really have solid stuff. The only advice I could give, besides keep at it, would be to go extremely simple. You may think what you're doing now is simple, but it could even go simpler than that. Once you get that lookin nice, work from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 i looked back at that character and i kinda like it although it is messy try to make the lines cleaner and add the lower half your lines on this one... http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soy_peice.jpg'> sloppy...;etters are ok umm id say practice try to make your lines more stright..sum of the lines curve a little and sum are streight try drwin shit on graph paper or on lined paper to have visual points and try to sketch ti first instead fo just freehanding it once your better you can do it but allso practice yoru letters... what i have been doin is i got 4 letters in my name and so i make 4 equal rectangles and space them evenly and then draw basic letters in the box tyring to make each letter proportional to the other that why there is a eveness to my letters then try makein about 6 or 7 of the equal rectangles then starting with the most basic letter make that in the first the go to the next box same letter but add something to it then etc. ..... if there an bad typos in this sorry i really suck at typing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soydevilpeice.jpg'> yeah i now i have sloppy lines i have been trying to work on that i will try to get ahold of a digi so i can take some pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 k that charicture is a lot better yet n this oen it looks weird with out the lower half and you need to drop those letters and start doin the most basic of the basic... heres and example of what im talkign about... http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00410163f00000034.jpg'> i know its so simple but if you check the thread i started (new and needs some help) most of the members have said it burns everything i have done...i belive you might be getting ahead of yourself just as i have done but there is still a lot of potential... so practice practice practice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swiffer Jet Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 hey bank, what font is that sketch from? it looks nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 um i created from that movie uh Die Another Day the james bond movie i took it from that.. i dont know how true it is too it but i liek what i got from it though i think it came out more like the liquidforce logo ... it helps practiceng straightness while looking good...um check this site... fontfoundry.com ....you can smple what word wood look liek in any font its kinda cool i found sum i liked that would be simple they have some good script stuff too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Dazzle Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Originally posted by BANK um... its not very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 dazzle can you tell me what parts i need to improve on ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soy_red.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Keep at it with the red devil char,I see a great future for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 ok man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 i actually just drew that char up a couple days ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Yep:huh?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 um again in concurrence with the some of the members i think keep the charcter.....but in my opinion drop those letters start from scratch try to make some basic shit liek i showed above... DANKMAN told me about HENSE and SEVER from Atlanta,GA um they are are good ate makeing straight letters real dope: http://paintmyface.puregraffiti.com/atl-bombing/agl03-born-hense-sever_x444.jpg'> http://paintmyface.puregraffiti.com/atl-bombing/rooftop-hense-sever.jpg'> http://paintmyface.puregraffiti.com/atl-bombing/trn_sever_x300-5.jpg'> http://paintmyface.puregraffiti.com/atl-bombing/cb_sever_billboard_x320-5.jpg'> they make keep it simpel yet make it look real dope try something liek that all flicks stolen from: http://paintmyface.puregraffiti.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 yeah that does look good i am goiung to start over in that kind of style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InDY_500 Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Your characters are straight.....You might wonna work on them a little more though....I'm kinda unsure about the throwies...I'm liking but you might wonna work on them a bit.....Good nontheless sir........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Dazzle Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Originally posted by grapesoda dazzle can you tell me what parts i need to improve on ? Start simple. Like.....SUPER simple. Straight lines, learn the structures of the letters, then you can start getting all fancy. Try writing SOY in various fonts on your computer. That's what people always seem to suggest on here. I don't know if that works..... When I look at it, all I can think is that you're trying to make it look too much like graffiti. Which is understandable for someone just starting. My very first forray in to graffiti looked just like your stuff. I guess the only way is to start simple and go from there....be patient, it's going to take a LONG time before you even get halfway decent... But anyway, I hate doing this shit. What the hell do I know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kan Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 I got a digi yeah it seems to be the general concensus that i should go simpler and do straight letters and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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