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critiuqe me or i will kill your pets

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by kan, May 1, 2004.

  1. kan

    kan New Jack

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    critiuqe me or i will kill your pets

    Discussion started by kan - May 1, 2004

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  2. BANK

    BANK 12oz Junior Member

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    BANK - Replied May 1, 2004

    um... its not very good try posting some other stuff cuz that stuff pretty weak... my opinion may not be very valid due to the fact that im still a toy
     
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  3. timemachine

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    meh i dun really liek em much but man u got potential, just keep trying
     
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  4. kan

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    simple of course your opinion matters im not one of those people who go off on people just cause they dont like their stuff[​IMG]
     
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    AORAone - Replied May 1, 2004

    well that one liner aint bad. good job. your character is a bit off tho, develop him more, detail, make him less full-out cartoon. dont make the lines so sketch, you know? cleaner. go cleaner.
     
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  6. kan

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    kan - Replied May 1, 2004

    i see what your saying about my char and before anyone says anything i know my hand is disgusting
     
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    kan - Replied May 1, 2004

    doodles
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    some of the top writers dont have a fresh hand, some got it some dont.
     
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  9. InfamousOne

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    stop writing or ill kill your pets
     
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  10. why write?

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    why write? - Replied May 1, 2004

    the 1st character and 1liner is dope...i wanna see that 1liner painted
     
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  11. kan

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    i have it up just dont have a digi
     
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    AORAone - Replied May 1, 2004

    invest in one immediatly
     
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    CIPHER_one - Replied May 1, 2004

    good start, just keep at it. That's the best advice. This early on you're not gonna really have solid stuff. The only advice I could give, besides keep at it, would be to go extremely simple. You may think what you're doing now is simple, but it could even go simpler than that. Once you get that lookin nice, work from there.
     
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  14. BANK

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    BANK - Replied May 1, 2004

    i looked back at that character and i kinda like it although it is messy try to make the lines cleaner and add the lower half your lines on this one...
    http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soy_peice.jpg'>
    sloppy...;etters are ok umm id say practice try to make your lines more stright..sum of the lines curve a little and sum are streight try drwin shit on graph paper or on lined paper to have visual points
    and try to sketch ti first instead fo just freehanding it once your better you can do it but allso practice yoru letters... what i have been doin is i got 4 letters in my name and so i make 4 equal rectangles and space them evenly and then draw basic letters in the box tyring to make each letter proportional to the other that why there is a eveness to my letters then try makein about 6 or 7 of the equal rectangles then starting with the most basic letter make that in the first the go to the next box same letter but add something to it then etc. ..... if there an bad typos in this sorry i really suck at typing...
     
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    kan - Replied May 1, 2004

    http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/soykrh/soydevilpeice.jpg'>

    yeah i now i have sloppy lines i have been trying to work on that i will try to get ahold of a digi so i can take some pics
     
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