nokos Posted September 21, 2003 Share Posted September 21, 2003 This thread is for everyone to post flicks. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00370835f00000006.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00370835f00000009.jpg'> -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DETO Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 Nice. I Like.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toad_AAA Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 sexy yo nokos hit me up on aim THEN WILLY SAID Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 i cant really see the first one, but it looks good from what i can see, the second one is super cool, minus the star, but thats my 23432 cents Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nokos Posted September 22, 2003 Author Share Posted September 22, 2003 Yo, thanks everyone! :). Yeah and onesecondple, I prob will get rid of the star, now that I look at it, its kinda played out. Thanks for the advice :). And toad, I dont have aim :(. So, post what ya got everyone!!!! -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stomah Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 I like the character on the top of the first page. nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent_j5 Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 Those look cool and everything, but why do you give a shit what a bunch of doofs on computers(myself included) think about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmeromero Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 keep sketching keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvOne Posted September 23, 2003 Share Posted September 23, 2003 not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nokos Posted September 23, 2003 Author Share Posted September 23, 2003 Here are some simples I did today in school: http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00371605f00000002.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00371605f00000001.jpg'> -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted September 23, 2003 Share Posted September 23, 2003 i think there pretty cool, i lke the 3rd one u posted, just keep at'r.. peace -thret asc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Durden Posted September 23, 2003 Share Posted September 23, 2003 critique: all of them are essentially the same in that the letters are lacking and try a little too hard, theyre also executed poorly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nokos Posted September 24, 2003 Author Share Posted September 24, 2003 I totally disagree. Those are my simples, I do those really quick, dont really put time into them. I do those to decorate my notebooks. And for christs sake,most of those are not even my name(I dont want to get caught at school with nokos on my folders). And I definetly did not try to hard on those letters, I dont even really put much thought into my simples. Its just quick shit to pass time. But whatever bro, your 2 cents, is your 2 cents. Stay up. -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Green Posted September 24, 2003 Share Posted September 24, 2003 i dont get it you start a thread called sketches to critique and when someone gives the slightest bit of criticism.. you get defensive.. whats the deal.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nokos Posted September 24, 2003 Author Share Posted September 24, 2003 Not defensive, just getting out my point of view. You see, i like to discuss things. Its not like I dont care what you guys think. I like to discuss things. Ya know? Everyone's opinion is just as important. -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 Originally posted by nokos This thread is for everyone to post flicks. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00370835f00000006.jpg '> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00370835f00000009.jpg'> -nokos tooo easy just to go wh symetry and curls make it more full and interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 like the notebook piece! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent_j5 Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 Originally posted by nokos Not defensive, just getting out my point of view. You see, i like to discuss things. Its not like I dont care what you guys think. I like to discuss things. Ya know? Everyone's opinion is just as important. -nokos I understand but why did you go all ape shit in that other thread when people weren't feeling your stuff??? I like your stuff but I think your a hypocrit, sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 For what it's worth... criticism All of your Nokos sketches are poor. Not a dis but they need serious help. I was going to chalk that up to you being new to this... till I saw the Never piece you posted. Now, here you have something. The flow and feel of that piece should be your blue print for future pieces. Though even there I have some things to add... Both of your E's have long bars on their bottoms. Shorten them. Why? Because those long bars are coming too far into the next letter. While sometimes that can be a good thing, it also has to be a fuctional thing. In that sketch those long bars do nothing but hinder your piece. Other than that I actually like the piece. Nice weight to it and even the tic-toc of colors looks good. I guess if it were me I would lose the ONE at the end of it. But that's me and you're you. And besides a big red ball at the left end some clouds would really pull that whole thing off nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OptimusPrime Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 how bout this? http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid81/p268ac56c8b5d3246796a482ff7eeb1eb/fafd1805.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nokos Posted September 26, 2003 Author Share Posted September 26, 2003 Hey everyone, thanks for the critiquing. I'll work on it definetly. Optimus, I think it would look better with colors and 3d. Im one of the types that really doesnt lookfor letters as much as just shapes and stuff. I like that sketch a little over all, but it could be so much bettter with more vibrant colors. -nokos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stinkink Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 SOME SEATTLE SKETCHES... STAK http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/28863/p/498193_7508261826653642933_vl.jpg'> A LITTLE DIRTY http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/28863/p/498197_7861699990161982449_vl.jpg'> NAM http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/28863/p/498194_5256365813691036101_vl.jpg'> GETS http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/28863/p/498195_5455065900778331489_vl.jpg'> THE KID http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/28863/p/498196_4179457549997743737_vl.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 Yet more... criticism Optimus... I'm not even sure what it says so it'll be hard to critique, and have you understand me at the same time. Though I'll give it a shot... I understand what you were trying to accomplish with the arrows. The Rorshach Test feel... equal weight on both sides. Big fan of that myself. Giant is the king when it comes to that. However, it has to flow. I'll start from the left and work my way over to the right. Maybe it's a matter of taste but I think if your letters are rounded maybe those slivers reaching out to your arrows should also be rounded. Instead of hard sharp right angles. The arrows at the top and bottom, not good. The top ones are too high up there and no longer working with your piece. Bring 'em down so they can continue to party with everyone else. The bottom arrows look like they were just kinda thrown in there to pull off the equal weight thing. Particularly the arrow coming off your middle letter. And the arrow to the left of that is so forced that it hinders the overall feel of that letter, and it seperates the styles. The arrow on the right is feeling like the arrow on the left. It's a chubby chaser. A skinny arrow who likes rounded letters. And that could work. Though I think you need to re-work their position a little bit. Maybe run the arrows behind the letters instead of in front. Just a thought. Jeez... I could start a controversial thread where all I do is critique sketches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spike Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 Re: Yet more... criticism Originally posted by Joker Jeez... I could start a controversial thread where all I do is critique sketches. That wouldn't be bad at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciste Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 do it up Joker. That robot character is nice, by the kid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ERIZENO Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 Re: Yet more... criticism Originally posted by Joker Jeez... I could start a controversial thread where all I do is critique sketches. A "JOKER dropping science" thread would be nice. i personaly would like hints, tricks, thoughts, and schooling from the man. i recently realized my lack of a mentor, and half-assed jumping in and out of the game has me looking at this from the wrong perspective ... so i have been tearing down my work and starting over from a new angle. i would take advantage of words from joker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent_j5 Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 why dont you spring for a Joker hotline ... reminds me of "saved by the bell".... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 Re: Yet more... criticism Originally posted by Joker Jeez... I could start a controversial thread where all I do is critique sketches. FO SHO! that thread would be off the hook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nekro Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 Originally posted by silent_j5 why dont you spring for a Joker hotline ... reminds me of "saved by the bell".... Skip to internet radio and picture hosting. "welcome to the Joker show, we're on the phone with nokos today from new Jack city." "Hi joker, I'm a long time listener, first time caller...." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Durden Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 Originally posted by Al Green i dont get it you start a thread called sketches to critique and when someone gives the slightest bit of criticism.. you get defensive.. whats the deal.. yeah...i was wondering that myself. excuses excuses dude, if you didnt want people to critique some stuff you "just mess around with to decorate notebooks" then you shouldnt have posted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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