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critique my shitty letters!

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by el coro, May 8, 2003.

  1. el coro

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    critique my shitty letters!

    Discussion started by el coro - May 8, 2003

    hey all, i've been trying to get my letters up to par, and i dunno anymore. any feedback on what i'm doing wrong would be greatly appreciated. lets keep this constructive, bear in mind i am a 12 year graffiti vet, but my focus to this point has really only been characters and background elements, so i'm looking to balance myself out a bit. here area few letter sets i've done lately. personally, i think they all suck, and thats why i'm posting them. thanks-c36
    http://www.coro36ink.com/updates/sketchbook/katsuweb.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.coro36ink.com/updates/sketchbook/lets03-001web.jpg'>
     
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  2. Frost-BK

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    Frost-BK - Replied May 8, 2003

    Not bad. . .The E on the last one is kinda wierd, anyways post more.
     
  3. Kes_One_HTFD

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    Kes_One_HTFD - Replied May 8, 2003

    shits serious. i especially like the one that has the teal forcefield. i saw your other shit on that concept art website. those "doodles" are dope ass hell. The crosshatching you do with that brush pen makes those chracters look nice as hell. The jeans with no upper body look ill.
     
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  4. ctrl+alt+del

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    ctrl+alt+del - Replied May 8, 2003

    color that bottom corner in black?

    i like katsu characters:cool:
     
  5. Intangible

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    Intangible - Replied May 8, 2003

    12 year old vet my fucking ass...and if you aint the katsu now in NYC...get off his name.
     
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  6. el coro

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    el coro - Replied May 8, 2003

    actually, yes i've been bombing coro since '91. and katsu is my dogs name :)
     
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  7. Intangible

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    Intangible - Replied May 8, 2003

    im sure katsu has put in more work then both you combined...
     
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  8. WebsterUno

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    WebsterUno - Replied May 8, 2003

    where is this thread at??? I want to see.

    You letters are clean, I see no major problem.

    forcefield, lolz...I call it a 2nd outline, whatevers clever.
     
  9. anonymity1

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    anonymity1 - Replied May 8, 2003

    not bad, youve got coloring skills...I'm feeling the first and the second one
     
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  10. WRECKONIZE

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    WRECKONIZE - Replied May 8, 2003

    that nate is sick
     
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  11. HECZONER

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    HECZONER - Replied May 8, 2003

    BETTER THAN SOME OF THESE FUCKIN WACK ASSES ON HERE!!

    I DONT SEE WHAT THE PROB WITH YOUR LETTERS IS!! SHITTY? I THINK NOT, THEY ARE WELL UP TO PAR... NOT ONLY THAT BUT YOU POSTIN, UNLIKE WHYNING LITTLE BITCHES IN HERE!
     
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  12. eseLokE1uno

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    eseLokE1uno - Replied May 8, 2003

    I find it hard to critique your letters since they are colored and you have dope fills and color schemes. Post some black and whites so that your letters stand in their standard form and ill get back to ya. You obiously know enough about art that you could camoflage your shit if you wanted to and I see a mix of basic graff with graphic degin in your first images. Its not bad but if you really want to develop them further find a style you want to do and sketch it over many times in pencil until you get it looking right. Then do that again and again kinda like doing quick figure drawings only you can come back and fix the mistakes-
     
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  13. anonymity1

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    anonymity1 - Replied May 8, 2003

    what was that link to the concept art site you were on?
     
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  14. TheTruthHrtz

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    TheTruthHrtz - Replied May 8, 2003

    Not bad. The first one is kinda interesting.
     
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  15. ETHREADZNY

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    ETHREADZNY - Replied May 8, 2003

    first off coro, you got unbelievable art skills
    second, you got the right attitude
    third the letters show skill, not really my personal style, but dope none the less
     
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