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critique my shitty letters!

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by el coro, May 8, 2003.

  1. el coro

    el coro New Jack

    Joined: Apr 21, 2003 Messages: 20 Likes Received: 0
    hey all, i've been trying to get my letters up to par, and i dunno anymore. any feedback on what i'm doing wrong would be greatly appreciated. lets keep this constructive, bear in mind i am a 12 year graffiti vet, but my focus to this point has really only been characters and background elements, so i'm looking to balance myself out a bit. here area few letter sets i've done lately. personally, i think they all suck, and thats why i'm posting them. thanks-c36
    http://www.coro36ink.com/updates/sketchbook/katsuweb.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.coro36ink.com/updates/sketchbook/lets03-001web.jpg'>
     
  2. Frost-BK

    Frost-BK Guest

    Not bad. . .The E on the last one is kinda wierd, anyways post more.
     
  3. Kes_One_HTFD

    Kes_One_HTFD Member

    Joined: Oct 18, 2002 Messages: 659 Likes Received: 0
    shits serious. i especially like the one that has the teal forcefield. i saw your other shit on that concept art website. those "doodles" are dope ass hell. The crosshatching you do with that brush pen makes those chracters look nice as hell. The jeans with no upper body look ill.
     
  4. ctrl+alt+del

    ctrl+alt+del Guest

    color that bottom corner in black?

    i like katsu characters:cool:
     
  5. Intangible

    Intangible 12oz Legend

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 17,479 Likes Received: 6
    12 year old vet my fucking ass...and if you aint the katsu now in NYC...get off his name.
     
  6. el coro

    el coro New Jack

    Joined: Apr 21, 2003 Messages: 20 Likes Received: 0
    actually, yes i've been bombing coro since '91. and katsu is my dogs name :)
     
  7. Intangible

    Intangible 12oz Legend

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 17,479 Likes Received: 6
    im sure katsu has put in more work then both you combined...
     
  8. WebsterUno

    WebsterUno Guest

    where is this thread at??? I want to see.

    You letters are clean, I see no major problem.

    forcefield, lolz...I call it a 2nd outline, whatevers clever.
     
  9. anonymity1

    anonymity1 Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 28, 2003 Messages: 1,945 Likes Received: 0
    not bad, youve got coloring skills...I'm feeling the first and the second one
     
  10. WRECKONIZE

    WRECKONIZE Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 15, 2003 Messages: 1,282 Likes Received: 1
  11. HECZONER

    HECZONER Senior Member

    Joined: Nov 27, 2002 Messages: 1,354 Likes Received: 0
    BETTER THAN SOME OF THESE FUCKIN WACK ASSES ON HERE!!

    I DONT SEE WHAT THE PROB WITH YOUR LETTERS IS!! SHITTY? I THINK NOT, THEY ARE WELL UP TO PAR... NOT ONLY THAT BUT YOU POSTIN, UNLIKE WHYNING LITTLE BITCHES IN HERE!
     
  12. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 1,280 Likes Received: 0
    I find it hard to critique your letters since they are colored and you have dope fills and color schemes. Post some black and whites so that your letters stand in their standard form and ill get back to ya. You obiously know enough about art that you could camoflage your shit if you wanted to and I see a mix of basic graff with graphic degin in your first images. Its not bad but if you really want to develop them further find a style you want to do and sketch it over many times in pencil until you get it looking right. Then do that again and again kinda like doing quick figure drawings only you can come back and fix the mistakes-
     
  13. anonymity1

    anonymity1 Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 28, 2003 Messages: 1,945 Likes Received: 0
    what was that link to the concept art site you were on?
     
  14. TheTruthHrtz

    TheTruthHrtz Junior Member

    Joined: Mar 30, 2003 Messages: 149 Likes Received: 0
    Not bad. The first one is kinda interesting.
     
  15. ETHREADZNY

    ETHREADZNY Elite Member

    Joined: Feb 11, 2002 Messages: 3,129 Likes Received: 4
    first off coro, you got unbelievable art skills
    second, you got the right attitude
    third the letters show skill, not really my personal style, but dope none the less
     
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