decu goldyn1 Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 critique my ish plz fixed if anybody would like to comment plz do so i'm sorta a beginner i get opinions from other local writers but i would like to see what others think peace NuR.D http://genjala.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743980.nurthousand2.jpg'> http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743975.junglenurd.jpg'> http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743981.nurd01.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
decu goldyn1 Posted June 27, 2002 Author Share Posted June 27, 2002 nUrd non conformist underestimate realities depth http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743985.nurd3times.jpg'> http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743988.Nu.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the thyme Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 http://dinkeroo.homestead.com/files/redx.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest melt Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 I can only see the first one, and it looks pretty ill. I like the colors you used. :dazed: -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cdz Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 i dont like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 too bland for this day and age! try adding something. I dont know what but just think of soemthing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest big PERM Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 i dont like how the part under the round part of the R just sticks out from no where(on the first two) and is overlapped by the round part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
control Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 i thought it said ADR at first...work on your letter forms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
decu goldyn1 Posted June 27, 2002 Author Share Posted June 27, 2002 too bland for this day and age! yea i know it's pretty old school style i don't really care for the 3D shit and i like readables work on your letter forms trying to like i wrote i'm sorta of restarting in graff so it's all experimental eventually i'll find my style Peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Durden Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 from what the infamous six foot killah told me about you he said you definetly have potential......i agree. personally, though, im not really one for the multi-colored fills thing....like....i know alot of peopld do them, but it's just not my cup of meat..............that doesnt count though really as its personal preference. good job so far. mds.vc.ubd.am clique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HearGunShots Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 Ok- pick up Subway Art and practice the simple letters As you get better you letters will get looser. Practice with "bars," when sketching. If the top/side of the line goes one way so should the other. The dondi book is a good refrence for the connection of letters and negative space. I would take it easy on the fills until you devolpe more style. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rainydays Posted June 27, 2002 Share Posted June 27, 2002 uuuuuuuuh....the second sketch is okay the letters arew okay...i think u should work on forming your letters more than worry about adding dimensions....and i dont care for the fill ins......keep it simple...:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted June 28, 2002 Share Posted June 28, 2002 you are just about there....at the level where someone can say "hey thats nice". i recommend taking off some of the extra limbs and getting some lighter colors for the fill and use a less distracting and A LESS confusing fill-design. lookin sharp...just a little more practice and you wil be at the right level. * "A LESS" = edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beatupjettapainter Posted June 28, 2002 Share Posted June 28, 2002 never heard of you........ you suck toy die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted June 28, 2002 Share Posted June 28, 2002 <img src=http://hyperphoto.photoloft.com/view/exportImage.asp?s=cano&i=9686507&w=242&h=400>'> This is what I want to do to your drawing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
decu goldyn1 Posted June 28, 2002 Author Share Posted June 28, 2002 thanks for the advice and input now as for the last 2 post i would say i like to see the hate too but that was just some asshole type $hit that didn't make any sense it wasn't even funny :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted June 29, 2002 Share Posted June 29, 2002 Originally posted by decu goldyn1 thanks for the advice and input now as for the last 2 post i would say i like to see the hate too but that was just some asshole type $hit that didn't make any sense it wasn't even funny :confused: I dont hate you...I just like to see ninjas hurt people... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ArtvandaL Posted June 29, 2002 Share Posted June 29, 2002 you suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kode Posted June 29, 2002 Share Posted June 29, 2002 NOT BAD.:king: i'm not really feeling the character at the bottom of the first one.(could'nt see the others.):D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
el nervo Posted July 1, 2002 Share Posted July 1, 2002 it is okey but stick to basic form for awhile til you understand how to tweak your letters:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEE_rase_war Posted July 1, 2002 Share Posted July 1, 2002 wow..more wasted paper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted July 1, 2002 Share Posted July 1, 2002 Originally posted by TEE_rase_war wow..more wasted paper :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEFCON2.0 Posted July 2, 2002 Share Posted July 2, 2002 Ya its not too bad the fill could use some work but id have ta say the first one looks better than the rest sence there all RED [ X ] 'S lol keep it up try new styles of letters........Those are kinda old skool...:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bubble cloud Posted July 2, 2002 Share Posted July 2, 2002 very good piece i think your letter form is good.the u is great.dont worry too much about the connections functioning perfectly.some of the best pieces dont make perfect sense.it looks like you did look at subway art and possibly dondi.the way the colors are placed take away from the outline. in my opinion use one color fill or figure out how to inhance the flow with the fill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rgb1 Posted July 2, 2002 Share Posted July 2, 2002 the lines are weak, whats that shit on the bottom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEE_rase_war Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 yes...after more carefully observing this sketch i think you should hit the books and do your homework son... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiDiSTiCone Posted July 5, 2002 Share Posted July 5, 2002 the color of your letters in the first kinda confuses my eye, but it looks pretty good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mopius Posted July 5, 2002 Share Posted July 5, 2002 http://www.thefree1.com/2002/ars/070402/old002.jpg'> "stick a fork in me Jim, im done" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
decu goldyn1 Posted July 5, 2002 Author Share Posted July 5, 2002 thanks for the replies that's not my best sketch it's just that the other's wouldn't work http://genji.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743981.nurd01.jpg'> http://genji.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743975.junglenurd.jpg'> i know i have a ways to go and i don't give damn about paper i'm far from the amazon :dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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