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critique my ish plz

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by decu goldyn1, Jun 26, 2002.

  1. decu goldyn1

    decu goldyn1 Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 24, 2001 Messages: 1,098 Likes Received: 1
    critique my ish plz fixed

    if anybody would like to comment plz do so
    i'm sorta a beginner i get opinions from other local writers but i would like to see what others think
    [img]http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743975.junglenurd.jpg'> [img]http://genjaro.image.pbase.com/u11/jemanye/medium/2743981.nurd01.jpg'>
  2. decu goldyn1

    decu goldyn1 Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 24, 2001 Messages: 1,098 Likes Received: 1
    non conformist underestimate realities depth
  3. the thyme

    the thyme Member

    Joined: Feb 9, 2001 Messages: 316 Likes Received: 0
  4. melt

    melt Guest

  5. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    I can only see the first one, and it looks pretty ill. I like the colors you used. :dazed:

  6. cdz

    cdz Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2001 Messages: 562 Likes Received: 0
    i dont like it

    FROSTY Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2001 Messages: 2,248 Likes Received: 5
    too bland for this day and age!
    try adding something. I dont know what but just think of soemthing
  8. big PERM

    big PERM Guest

    i dont like how the part under the round part of the R just sticks out from no where(on the first two) and is overlapped by the round part
  9. control

    control New Jack

    Joined: Jun 22, 2002 Messages: 33 Likes Received: 0
    i thought it said ADR at first...work on your letter forms
  10. decu goldyn1

    decu goldyn1 Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 24, 2001 Messages: 1,098 Likes Received: 1
    yea i know it's pretty old school style i don't really care for the 3D shit and i like readables
    trying to like i wrote i'm sorta of restarting in graff so it's all experimental eventually i'll find my style
  11. Tyler Durden

    Tyler Durden Veteran Member

    Joined: Nov 18, 2001 Messages: 5,263 Likes Received: 40
    from what the infamous six foot killah told me about you he said you definetly have potential......i agree.

    personally, though, im not really one for the multi-colored fills thing....like....i know alot of peopld do them, but it's just not my cup of meat..............that doesnt count though really as its personal preference.

    good job so far.

    mds.vc.ubd.am clique.
  12. HearGunShots

    HearGunShots New Jack

    Joined: May 30, 2002 Messages: 48 Likes Received: 0
    Ok- pick up Subway Art and practice the simple letters As you get better you letters will get looser. Practice with "bars," when sketching. If the top/side of the line goes one way so should the other. The dondi book is a good refrence for the connection of letters and negative space. I would take it easy on the fills until you devolpe more style. Good luck!
  13. rainydays

    rainydays Guest

    uuuuuuuuh....the second sketch is okay the letters arew okay...i think u should work on forming your letters more than worry about adding dimensions....and i dont care for the fill ins......keep it simple...:eek:
  14. Kr430n5_666

    Kr430n5_666 Banned

    Joined: Oct 6, 2004 Messages: 19,229 Likes Received: 30
    you are just about there....at the level where someone can say "hey thats nice".

    i recommend taking off some of the extra limbs and getting some lighter colors for the fill and use a less distracting and A LESS confusing fill-design.

    lookin sharp...just a little more practice and you wil be at the right level.

    * "A LESS" = edit
  15. beatupjettapainter

    beatupjettapainter Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 6, 2001 Messages: 219 Likes Received: 0
    never heard of you........

    you suck toy die