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critique my ish plz

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by decu goldyn1, Jun 26, 2002.

  1. decu goldyn1

    decu goldyn1 12oz Senior Member

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    critique my ish plz

    Discussion started by decu goldyn1 - Jun 26, 2002

    critique my ish plz fixed

    if anybody would like to comment plz do so
    i'm sorta a beginner i get opinions from other local writers but i would like to see what others think
    peace
    NuR.D
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    decu goldyn1 - Replied Jun 26, 2002

    nUrd
    non conformist underestimate realities depth
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  3. the thyme

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    the thyme - Replied Jun 26, 2002

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  4. melt

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    melt - Replied Jun 26, 2002

    :lol:
     
  5. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jun 26, 2002

    I can only see the first one, and it looks pretty ill. I like the colors you used. :dazed:

    -A
     
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  6. cdz

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    cdz - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    i dont like it
     
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  7. FROSTY

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    FROSTY - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    too bland for this day and age!
    try adding something. I dont know what but just think of soemthing
     
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  8. big PERM

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    big PERM - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    i dont like how the part under the round part of the R just sticks out from no where(on the first two) and is overlapped by the round part
     
  9. control

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    control - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    i thought it said ADR at first...work on your letter forms
     
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  10. decu goldyn1

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    decu goldyn1 - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    yea i know it's pretty old school style i don't really care for the 3D shit and i like readables
    trying to like i wrote i'm sorta of restarting in graff so it's all experimental eventually i'll find my style
    Peace
     
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  11. Tyler Durden

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    Tyler Durden - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    from what the infamous six foot killah told me about you he said you definetly have potential......i agree.

    personally, though, im not really one for the multi-colored fills thing....like....i know alot of peopld do them, but it's just not my cup of meat..............that doesnt count though really as its personal preference.

    good job so far.

    mds.vc.ubd.am clique.
     
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    HearGunShots - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    Ok- pick up Subway Art and practice the simple letters As you get better you letters will get looser. Practice with "bars," when sketching. If the top/side of the line goes one way so should the other. The dondi book is a good refrence for the connection of letters and negative space. I would take it easy on the fills until you devolpe more style. Good luck!
     
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  13. rainydays

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    rainydays - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    uuuuuuuuh....the second sketch is okay the letters arew okay...i think u should work on forming your letters more than worry about adding dimensions....and i dont care for the fill ins......keep it simple...:eek:
     
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    Kr430n5_666 - Replied Jun 27, 2002

    you are just about there....at the level where someone can say "hey thats nice".

    i recommend taking off some of the extra limbs and getting some lighter colors for the fill and use a less distracting and A LESS confusing fill-design.

    lookin sharp...just a little more practice and you wil be at the right level.

    * "A LESS" = edit
     
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    beatupjettapainter - Replied Jun 28, 2002

    never heard of you........

    you suck toy die
     
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