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Criticize me

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by nervv, Mar 3, 2005.

  1. nervv

    nervv New Jack

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    Criticize me

    Discussion started by nervv - Mar 3, 2005

    I started writing and I don't know anyone with experience to criticize my work. I haven't gotten up much, so I don't have any flicks of that but...

    Paper:
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    My first hat:
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    Sketches: (too big)
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    02

    Don't flame too hard now =(
     
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  2. casekonly

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    casekonly - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    not bad
     
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  3. rize415

    rize415 12oz Senior Member

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    rize415 - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up
     
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  4. InfamousOne

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    InfamousOne - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    there is already a nerv in gsk....
     
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  5. Herbivore

    Herbivore 12oz Senior Member

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    Herbivore - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    yeah... and the characters in the first link aren't bad either. there's really not much advice anyone can give you besides "practice, practice, practice"... you're on the right path though.
     
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  6. exxell

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    exxell - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    dont worry what other people say. jus paint sketch whut u feel like.
    cuz yu may have different style from others and that whut makes yu an individual. trust me I ceen worst
    all i could say keep up the work.









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    ill........states............illest...
    midwest..monstahs
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  7. Mr. Chad

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    Mr. Chad - Replied Mar 3, 2005

    the first two or good but that 3rd one is no good.
     
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  8. th3_monk

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    not bad at all
     
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  9. H of BL

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    im likin it, keep it up
     
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  10. StarzAbove

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    StarzAbove - Replied Mar 6, 2005

    Aside from the millions of NERV(V,E,S,Z) out there. You color pretty good
    The 1st piece is ok the 2nd is pretty ill the 3rd is horrible.
    Overall good job
     
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  11. Flayed God X

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    Flayed God X - Replied Mar 6, 2005

    you got the idea but your letters are weak, work on simples
     
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  12. HAL*LOVE*U

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    HAL*LOVE*U - Replied Mar 6, 2005

    if i were u i would just do some straight letters i really like the second one

    but really work on strait letters and a name change wouldent hurt
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  13. nukka

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    nukka - Replied Mar 6, 2005

    get off the fuckin internet and paint you fag.
     
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  14. swif1

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    swif1 - Replied Mar 7, 2005

    Good fills but your letter structure is lacking.
     
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  15. th3_monk

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    th3_monk - Replied Mar 7, 2005

    yeah
     
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