nervv Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 I started writing and I don't know anyone with experience to criticize my work. I haven't gotten up much, so I don't have any flicks of that but... Paper: My first hat: Sketches: (too big) 01 02 Don't flame too hard now =( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casekonly Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 not bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rize415 Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfamousOne Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 there is already a nerv in gsk.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herbivore Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 Originally posted by rize415@Mar 3 2005, 08:17 AM the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up Quoted post yeah... and the characters in the first link aren't bad either. there's really not much advice anyone can give you besides "practice, practice, practice"... you're on the right path though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exxell Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 dont worry what other people say. jus paint sketch whut u feel like. cuz yu may have different style from others and that whut makes yu an individual. trust me I ceen worst all i could say keep up the work. ------------------------------------- ill........states............illest... midwest..monstahs :king: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Chad Posted March 3, 2005 Share Posted March 3, 2005 the first two or good but that 3rd one is no good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th3_monk Posted March 4, 2005 Share Posted March 4, 2005 not bad at all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H of BL Posted March 6, 2005 Share Posted March 6, 2005 im likin it, keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted March 6, 2005 Share Posted March 6, 2005 Aside from the millions of NERV(V,E,S,Z) out there. You color pretty good The 1st piece is ok the 2nd is pretty ill the 3rd is horrible. Overall good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flayed God X Posted March 6, 2005 Share Posted March 6, 2005 you got the idea but your letters are weak, work on simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAL*LOVE*U Posted March 6, 2005 Share Posted March 6, 2005 if i were u i would just do some straight letters i really like the second one but really work on strait letters and a name change wouldent hurt ---- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nukka Posted March 7, 2005 Share Posted March 7, 2005 get off the fuckin internet and paint you fag. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted March 7, 2005 Share Posted March 7, 2005 Good fills but your letter structure is lacking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th3_monk Posted March 7, 2005 Share Posted March 7, 2005 yeah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted March 7, 2005 Share Posted March 7, 2005 1. anyone that tells you not to listen to what people say is a toy and sucks. 2. don't listen to everything everyone says, cause most of them are toys and suck. 3. spend more time working on making solid letters than making pretty colored sketches. 4. you might consider a name change. 'nerv' is pretty generic. 5. trucker hats are plaaaayed out. you say '1st' as if you plan to make more. i would not advise this. 6. the sketch with the gun is really gross. you should throw it away. 7. photoshop is for making the olsen twins touch eachothers boobs, not for graff. 8. every time you make a new sketch, compare it to the 3rd one. does it look anything like it? no? good. 9. a quick way to fame is through reality based tv shows. see if you can get on one then wear a t shirt/jacket/hat/face paint that has your tag on it. 10. there are two types of writers, indy-rock/hardcore/scenester kids and wiggers. decide which group you more closely resemble then go to the gap and buy a whole new wardrobe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokejuda Posted March 10, 2005 Share Posted March 10, 2005 that ssome good advice especially #10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishnet Posted March 10, 2005 Share Posted March 10, 2005 i fit in the indy/hardcore/emo category but i still likes to keeps it gangster... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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