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Criticize me

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by nervv, Mar 3, 2005.

  1. nervv

    nervv New Jack

    Joined: Feb 17, 2005 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    I started writing and I don't know anyone with experience to criticize my work. I haven't gotten up much, so I don't have any flicks of that but...


    My first hat:

    Sketches: (too big)

    Don't flame too hard now =(
  2. casekonly

    casekonly Veteran Member

    Joined: Aug 6, 2002 Messages: 8,264 Likes Received: 5
  3. rize415

    rize415 Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 15, 2002 Messages: 1,753 Likes Received: 0
    the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up
  4. InfamousOne

    InfamousOne Member

    Joined: Jan 5, 2004 Messages: 329 Likes Received: 0
    there is already a nerv in gsk....
  5. Herbivore

    Herbivore Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 12, 2004 Messages: 1,431 Likes Received: 1
    yeah... and the characters in the first link aren't bad either. there's really not much advice anyone can give you besides "practice, practice, practice"... you're on the right path though.
  6. exxell

    exxell Junior Member

    Joined: Feb 18, 2005 Messages: 179 Likes Received: 0
    dont worry what other people say. jus paint sketch whut u feel like.
    cuz yu may have different style from others and that whut makes yu an individual. trust me I ceen worst
    all i could say keep up the work.

  7. Mr. Chad

    Mr. Chad Member

    Joined: Dec 17, 2004 Messages: 480 Likes Received: 0
    the first two or good but that 3rd one is no good.
  8. th3_monk

    th3_monk Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 776 Likes Received: 0
  9. H of BL

    H of BL Member

    Joined: Jan 10, 2005 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    im likin it, keep it up
  10. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,134 Likes Received: 6
    Aside from the millions of NERV(V,E,S,Z) out there. You color pretty good
    The 1st piece is ok the 2nd is pretty ill the 3rd is horrible.
    Overall good job
  11. Flayed God X

    Flayed God X Member

    Joined: Aug 9, 2004 Messages: 283 Likes Received: 0
    you got the idea but your letters are weak, work on simples
  12. HAL*LOVE*U

    HAL*LOVE*U Member

    Joined: May 22, 2004 Messages: 288 Likes Received: 0
    if i were u i would just do some straight letters i really like the second one

    but really work on strait letters and a name change wouldent hurt
  13. nukka

    nukka New Jack

    Joined: May 21, 2003 Messages: 88 Likes Received: 0
    get off the fuckin internet and paint you fag.
  14. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 29
    Good fills but your letter structure is lacking.
  15. th3_monk

    th3_monk Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 776 Likes Received: 0