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constructive criticism

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by nozaki, Jun 19, 2004.

  1. nozaki

    nozaki Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 23, 2003 Messages: 1,323 Likes Received: 0
    it's obviously not a perfect outline, but i was just wondering what people thought of it...
    deno:
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  2. Fate2*88

    Fate2*88 Member

    Joined: Aug 3, 2003 Messages: 702 Likes Received: 0
    Yo

    I'd like to see it painted. I like it. Um, did you get better? I'm not sure if I've seen any old work, but if it was as good as this piece i would have remembered it.

    Oh yeah, now looking at it carefully, maybe just take a little bit out of it, like some of the extensions look as though they serve no purpose. Don't get me wrong, I still like it, reminds me a little of my style, but still different none the less.
     
  3. nozaki

    nozaki Senior Member

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    thanks, but you might be mistaking me for another deno.... this is deno.hb (pennsylvania).
     
  4. Fate2*88

    Fate2*88 Member

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    Yeah probably

    Keep up the good work.
     
  5. shani1985

    shani1985 Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2004 Messages: 169 Likes Received: 0
    nice one
    as Fate2*88 said - you really should paint it
     
  6. InDY_500

    InDY_500 Veteran Member

    Joined: Sep 30, 2002 Messages: 5,169 Likes Received: 67
    Thats some nice work sir...Are you gonna repost it after you color it?...Other then that, keep that shit goin man.....
     
  7. CrazyLazy

    CrazyLazy Senior Member

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  8. nozaki

    nozaki Senior Member

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    i hardly color my outlines...i actually hardly draw outlines as of late. i've been freestyling a lot of pieces when i go to paint them, but i decided to buckle down and draw this one up...i guess i'll paint it soon. thanks for all the kind words guys
     
  9. THE CORONER

    THE CORONER Banned

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  10. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

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    looks good but i would cut down on the extensions a bit
     
  11. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

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    It looks good need colors!
     
  12. Angry Kids

    Angry Kids Member

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    looks good as a whole to someone who knows nothing about graff, but break it down and your letters aren't to great, i personally don't like it, but if you just looking for something wild then it's ok, work on less useless add on's and better letter structure
     
  13. KiSe

    KiSe Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 18, 2003 Messages: 1,354 Likes Received: 0
    and work on that N
     
  14. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,133 Likes Received: 6
    Just remember this kid i know writes DENO in nyc!
     
  15. nozaki

    nozaki Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 23, 2003 Messages: 1,323 Likes Received: 0
    i appreciate the feedback. yeah, i put a lot of useless add ons in the piece on purpose, it was kind of a study on different add ons in a way.

    also, it's nice to hear someone hate on my letter structure, because i always thought it was lacking pretty badly, but my friends and crew always say not to worry about it.

    yeah, there are like 100's of deno's out there...
     
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