Mr.Mojo Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 this is a new sketch ive been working on http://artisdead.org/conformpiece.jpg'> let the criticism begin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cazper Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 photoshop? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newjersey Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 im gonna come straight out and say it.... the letters suck backgrounds.....ok...... the conform on the top right and the word on the top left arent necessary... characters ok... i dont get the color thing but yeah.... and ummmm if u tried to make a barcode in the letters....that was definitly a dope idea... but u failed to succeed in it. but if that wasnt your goal....then i dunno.....try again 12oz dickism....:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted September 11, 2002 Author Share Posted September 11, 2002 Yeah, the barcode was the idea but FUCK im having soooo much trouble getting the letters to work. As for the other stuff im just playing around, trying some different things. And NO its not photoshop, I hand coloured it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 i like it , the letters arent that good i actually like the fill even though it came out not as it should of been , its nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeRoSoL JuNkiE Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 Add some 3d to te letters. I'm not really feelin the top half of the background, and i think the characters arms should stay away from the letters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cdz Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toyeattoywar Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 i like that fill alot. good character, the eyes are great. maybe try not to be so hard on yourself and critical and instead just let the letters flow??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kali Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 Is that girl Manga style? I like it, Shadowing looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shesmyheroin Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 not too shabby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 i like the character.........but the background sucks and does not fit in...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEFCON2.0 Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 I like the top part of the letters where it looks like a bar code every thing else I dont really like keep tryin.........:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JimboTheLion Posted September 11, 2002 Share Posted September 11, 2002 i like it! looks good. maybe you should have used some other colours on the character... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Grow a Beard Posted September 12, 2002 Share Posted September 12, 2002 ecce. youve got some dope stencils...........and theres only one thing to remember.............straight letters are totally legal to to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shitonastick Posted September 12, 2002 Share Posted September 12, 2002 I like the whole idea,and it looks nice,AS long as u dont scroll down 2 the letters....they fuckin suck.... BUT(notice the but),i have seen some of ur stuff,and i like it,so i think u can do better.... Also,it seems that ur usin pretty dark colors in the background and shit,so maybe u shouldnt use so light colors on the letters....?? Peace midgetsuckers:crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted September 13, 2002 Author Share Posted September 13, 2002 Hey, thanks everyone for the feedback, will take it all into account and keep trying- yeh, i dont particularly like the letters myself, but I just wanted to get the whole idea down. Kali- yeh, ive tried to combine manga techniques with graff style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ass hairball Posted September 13, 2002 Share Posted September 13, 2002 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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