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Chaos Artworks

Discussion in 'Art & Design' started by c_t, Feb 28, 2005.

  1. c_t

    c_t New Jack

    Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    [​IMG]

    pls check out my site, feedback welcome.

    Urban Art

    peace.
     
  2. IDrinkSprite

    IDrinkSprite Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 11, 2002 Messages: 1,165 Likes Received: 7
  3. Herbivore

    Herbivore Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 12, 2004 Messages: 1,431 Likes Received: 1
    that font needs to go. that's my feedback.
     
  4. c_t

    c_t New Jack

    Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    agreed

    im working on it

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  5. misteraven

    misteraven Administrator

    Joined: May 7, 1999 Messages: 8,763 Likes Received: 307
    wrong forum section.

    design criticism belongs in 'untitled'.

    moved.
     
  6. IzacFour

    IzacFour New Jack

    Joined: Oct 10, 2004 Messages: 84 Likes Received: 0
    Some of the art work is very tacky.
     
  7. c_t

    c_t New Jack

    Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    which pieces do you feel that way about and please could you tell me why.
    constructive criticism is always useful

    thx
     
  8. AW

    AW New Jack

    Joined: Oct 17, 2003 Messages: 99 Likes Received: 0
    That fucked up graffiti font is everywhere. I wish it would go away.

    Your navigation isn't layed out intuitively. When I roll over the menu, the word disappears. WHY? Don't stack your type like you did with your menu. It's hard to read, and wastes space.

    The top area is a HUGE waste of space, and the freshest work area is to spaced out.

    The way the top area reloads all the time is annoying. The whole left column is to narrow and makes for annoying reading.

    The whole site is blended together, and there is NO hiearchy. I don't really like this site at all.
     
  9. c_t

    c_t New Jack

    Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    Thx AW, good site critique there and for the most part i am in complete agreement with you.

    The site sucks i know, a new site is in development and should be online in a week or two.


    I was hoping for comments on some of the stuff i had painted and was hoping for a fairly critical audience here.

    more comments pls.

    thx again AW
     
  10. AW

    AW New Jack

    Joined: Oct 17, 2003 Messages: 99 Likes Received: 0
    Thanks for listening.

    For a good simple site layout with good heiarchy go to Maxim Online.

    It's not the greatest site, but it does break up the content and utilizes the space well.

    K10K.net is also a good one to look at.
     
  11. Your artwork looks like it'll go somewhere in the future, you seem to have something going there, but it's still not there yet, and is in danger of not ever getting there with your current approach.

    Those little artist statements/descriptions you have there have to go. They come off as you being full of yourself and your art and for now it's not particularly something to be holding to such high esteem.

    Stop taking your stuff so seriously and discard the whole "Oh look, I'm an ARTIST" mentality and you'll improve tenfold.
     
  12. InfiniteWisdomOfThePezDispenser

    InfiniteWisdomOfThePezDispenser Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 27, 2004 Messages: 164 Likes Received: 0
    I didn't really give a good look at your stuff. I hit a pet peeve and decided to vent. I'm really, really starting to get tired of 'Urban' as the new buzzz word. Its almost as bad as 'Extreme' or even worse 'X-treme'.

    Listen to mamerro.
     
  13. c_t

    c_t New Jack

    Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    Thx guys, very useful criticism.

    The new site is now nearing completion, i have tried to incorporate all of your comments.

    Hopefully you will like it a little more.

    peace
     
  14. technikal

    technikal Member

    Joined: Jun 28, 2004 Messages: 314 Likes Received: 0
    Who said crime doesn't pay. :clown2: :clown2:
     
  15. seeking

    seeking Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: May 25, 2000 Messages: 32,277 Likes Received: 234
    i have a hard time respecting people that are too eager to make a buck.
    have quality work, a quality site and somewhat of a following before you go turning yourself into an art factory. otherwise it just looks opportunistic...especially with work that is sort of iconic and non-challenging.

    just my .02
     
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