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Blackout pages 1-13

Discussion in 'Art & Design' started by sabe2005, Jun 15, 2005.

  1. sabe2005

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    Blackout pages 1-13

    Discussion started by sabe2005 - Jun 15, 2005

    I'm working on a comic called Blackout. I always am looking for places to show it and get some c & c .... welp here it is....
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    cornpone - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    It' pretty cool. Color would make it much more exciting but I realize that is probably the last step. Over all I really like the artwork though. But I'm no comic book junkie.
     
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    jbrshmonster - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    looks pretty good..
    nice inking..
     
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  4. sabe2005

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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    Thx guys!,
    This is just gonna stay Black and white.
    Thx again for the C&c. :smiles:
     
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    dumy - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    inking job is fresh..story seems a little disjointed?..but maybe thats the point..anyways you get points for this...
     
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    POIESIS - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    alot nicer than your paper chase thread.
     
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  7. sabe2005

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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    dumy:
    I think the story when it's all together will be more solid, but I agree on certain parts.

    POIESIS:
    I would hope this is better then my sketch in paper section, after all that sketch took 20 mins, and it was just to mess around, this comic is an actual job which I work with a writter on, and takes anywhere from a week to 3 weeks per page.
     
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    Abracadabra - Replied Jun 15, 2005

    i like it. i know nothing of comics, so that's the beginning and end of my critique
     
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  9. HIDING BEHIND A SCREEN

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    HIDING BEHIND A SCREEN - Replied Jun 16, 2005

    NICE PICTURES, BORING STORYLINE
     
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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 16, 2005

    Mr. ABC:
    Well you know what you like, and I'm glad you like it. :)

    HIDING BEHIND A SCREEN--
    Considering that I do all the art, Thx!
    As for the story, it's going to heat up, it's a slow rider, one of those graphic novel ideas. But I do have to agree somewhat, here and there it's builds very slow plot-wise. Things are speeding up though.
     
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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 20, 2005

    I went ahead and re-did page (6) six, it has been pissing me off for awhile. Looks much better to me.... what do you all think, improvment?
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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 22, 2005

    I went and normalized the blacks on all previous pages and I completely re-did page 6. Thought I'd post the updates:
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    dear sas - Replied Jun 24, 2005

    although i dont have any knowlegde of comics like the rest of them, i really dig your stuff. have you made any other comics? havae a maling list or anything like that? even though im a starving student, id be willing to trade or pay for other comics youve done or work u wanna sell. email me, mrupfe@aol.com. thansk
     
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    sabe2005 - Replied Jun 25, 2005

    dear sasZ:
    Man I wish I did have a complete story. But it's not done yet.
    I have another comic along the lines of this style that is all my story and everything. But I'm only four pro pages into it. When I finish some photoshop work I'll post it.

    As for the email, I'm re-doing all these pages, re-scanning and type in Photoshop because I noticed some are fuzzy, I can't stand it so I'm using what I've learned about scanning and PS to change it. So i will send you those through the e-mail.

    Oh BTW: Thanks for the comments. Soon I will be not a starving student/artist freelancer and simply a working starving artist. ;)
     
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    sabe2005 - Replied Jul 11, 2005

    I guess I can't go an edit so I have to reply this. I re-scanned and re-photoshopped all the pages. This is how it will show up on print. This also is the last time I'll subject this thread to more re-posts of minor changes. Major to me but, that's me.
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