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beginner sketch

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by A3rk4An3e, Jun 1, 2001.

  1. A3rk4An3e

    A3rk4An3e New Jack

    Joined: May 20, 2001 Messages: 24 Likes Received: 0
    i wanna say thanks to cese...for posting my last sketch, i saw nobody liked it too much....but tell me what you think about this one.
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  2. i eat poo

    i eat poo New Jack

    Joined: Mar 30, 2001 Messages: 1 Likes Received: 0
  3. ruEtbeer

    ruEtbeer Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 24, 2001 Messages: 1,912 Likes Received: 0
     
  4. j3di

    j3di Member

    Joined: May 3, 2001 Messages: 540 Likes Received: 0
    aight, i wanna talk shit but im gunna be a nice guyand heed some advice...the color is aight...but the letters just look too goth or something...try rokken straight letters first with simple colors...and let style just come naturally...you show creativity but lack skill...not to be harsh but just lettin you know whatsup...keep it in your blackbook till you have something tight and then bomb away...thats the best advice i can give...piece
    j3di
     
  5. feeltheagony

    feeltheagony Junior Member

    Joined: Feb 26, 2001 Messages: 105 Likes Received: 0
    just stick to straight letters when u first start out, then once u get those down you can twist em any way u want...i totally neglected straight letters when i first started out and went right to piecing and once i started focusing just on straight letters ive improved all around.
     
  6. DoSeR

    DoSeR Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 1, 2001 Messages: 1,851 Likes Received: 0
    thats crazy... theres ALOT of space inbetween your too thin lines... just copy a computer font make real simple letters until you understand what makes the letter a letter ....
     
  7. Lil Spanky

    Lil Spanky New Jack

    Joined: May 9, 2001 Messages: 20 Likes Received: 0
    TOO FUCKING SKINNY!
    Not enough letter structure, either...the way your letters branch off it just looks random...
    And chill with the arrows...you don't need to add an arrow to EVERY fucking corner of your letters.
     
  8. scienxe

    scienxe Member

    Joined: Jun 1, 2001 Messages: 433 Likes Received: 0
    yeah skinny and random but i admire the attempt at an overall structure with the cross action you have going on. keep working at it!

    -scienxe
     
  9. curious george

    curious george Senior Member

    Joined: May 21, 2001 Messages: 1,359 Likes Received: 2
    when you do dis shit, make sure your letters can go together more...like, some parts is too skinny, den some parts is too fat...work on dat...but da color on it's aight...
     
  10. Poer...Yac

    Poer...Yac Member

    Joined: Mar 23, 2001 Messages: 264 Likes Received: 0
    next time post yer sketch in imerz post
     
  11. etchAsketch

    etchAsketch Member

    Joined: May 4, 2001 Messages: 351 Likes Received: 0
    Fatten em up, then post it in imerz's beginner sectioneroo.
     
  12. Destruction by Definition

    Destruction by Definition Veteran Member

    Joined: Apr 19, 2001 Messages: 5,237 Likes Received: 2
    alright, since everyone is giving you negative comments...

    its actually alright, there are some things you need to improve on, but doesnt everyone need to improve on something? The letters are skinny, but if you like it then dont change it...the only thing i would say is to make the two A's skinny also, they are a little bigger than the rest. Maybe just try to let the letters flow into each other more...but its not bad for a beginner...

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    <<BOMB HARD, DIE YOUNG>>
     
  13. Imerz

    Imerz Member

    Joined: Feb 22, 2001 Messages: 725 Likes Received: 0
  14. JROQ26

    JROQ26 Senior Member

    Joined: Aug 2, 2006 Messages: 1,070 Likes Received: 3
    WERE ALL THE PICS????
     
  15. JROQ26

    JROQ26 Senior Member

    Joined: Aug 2, 2006 Messages: 1,070 Likes Received: 3
    DBD PM ME I GOT SOME ????????
     
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