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beginner in search of critisism and what not.

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by HAZER, Mar 2, 2002.

  1. HAZER

    HAZER Guest

    Hey, Ive been taggin for a while now but Ive just started doing sketches and what not. Ima post some of shit on here and I'd like it if I got some critisism. maybe some pointers?


    ^that'd be my one liner.. it says haze.


    ^SOB, by me.



    Well, thanks for your time looking at my toyish shit ;)
  2. CIPHER_one

    CIPHER_one Senior Member

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  3. T.T Boy

    T.T Boy Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: May 18, 2001 Messages: 21,803 Likes Received: 41
    haze is taken.
  4. Fox Mulder

    Fox Mulder 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Nov 23, 2000 Messages: 12,434 Likes Received: 86
    you might want to stay in school because i saw a lot of misspellings. and i'm not talking about skool.
  5. Fox Mulder

    Fox Mulder 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Nov 23, 2000 Messages: 12,434 Likes Received: 86
    like hypothosis and bordum.
  6. trew

    trew Member

    Joined: Dec 24, 2001 Messages: 603 Likes Received: 0

    yes, haze is taken, I just started a thread on here with some of his stuff, its on page 2 right now I think, look it up. Maybe try coming up with a more original name, a lot of writers go through a few names before they settle on one.

    As for critisizm - as always, do simple letters first. The first sketch isn't so bad. Work on your handstyle, make it flow a little better, try working on a one liner a little later on. And there is just way to much jiberish that doesn't need to be there in the third sketch.
  7. -Rage-

    -Rage- 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Apr 12, 2001 Messages: 11,276 Likes Received: 71
    and again and again and again. :rolleyes:

    Kinda like my name...heh. :eek:
  8. Sekin

    Sekin New Jack

    Joined: Oct 16, 2001 Messages: 2 Likes Received: 1
    trying to do a style that isn't yours doesn't really work out. What I got from that was that you need to explore how you do letters. And do the simple stuff first like everyone says.
  9. cmeup

    cmeup Veteran Member

    Joined: Apr 17, 2001 Messages: 9,485 Likes Received: 1

    teeeeeeee hee heeeeeeeeeeeee

    teaser :D
  10. Abstract Rationality

    Abstract Rationality Senior Member

    Joined: May 17, 2001 Messages: 1,437 Likes Received: 59
    My first pointer would be changing ur name...its taken, and very well taken...It's really no big deal since you're just beginning, so exploring with diff names/letters is actually good. To get a name that hasn't been taken is mad hard nowadays, so ur gonna have to go a different route than a common four letter word...and my main advice would be to be patien and climb up the ladder...what i mean is, dont shoot for the cleanest wildstyle at first...try letters, simple ones, paint them, keep sketching and stay patient...it takes even years to develop the right skills to get u out there....originality pays as well..so once uve done immitating a lot of styles, u can add your own contribution...we all bite shit at first, but in the end its what we put into it that makes it our individual style and what not....most of all, dont listen too much at negative shit, only constructive critisism and shit that makes you better..you got two ears so let some shit go out the other one a lot of times...people talk too much shit..period...be safe...gluck.
  11. d-town_bomber

    d-town_bomber Veteran Member

    Joined: May 20, 2001 Messages: 7,032 Likes Received: 2
    change the name youngin
  12. DIO

    DIO Guest



    wheres my "HAZE" t-shirt?
    you guys are harsh...fuck em. im drunk. westside or something.
  14. destroyall

    destroyall New Jack

    Joined: Jan 9, 2001 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    twist wants his character back.
  15. Merdle

    Merdle Guest

    he tagged the lid of someones personal garbage can in a residentail sububrban ally hahaha sweet!!;)