in2_thevoid Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 top of the mornin to ya! haha, looks kind of like a flat tire, you know? but a nigguh is workin on that. *scanner cut it off a little ;) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/joker.jpg'> http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/werd.gif'> to my momma back in 85 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
not_like_you Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 :lol: And I thought you'd be the first one to start this thread Yellow Feets. In2thevoid- Where are the letters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 :lol: And I thought you'd be the first one to start this thread Yellow Feets. :lol: Hahaha. Yeah, I know what you mean. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 23, 2004 Author Share Posted August 23, 2004 Originally posted by not_like_you :lol: And I thought you'd be the first one to start this thread Yellow Feets. In2thevoid- Where are the letters? first letter... the next two letters is where it flows downward... and the last letter i was trying to go back up to the level with the first letter, but failed. :dunno: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
not_like_you Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 It would be easier to see if you told me what letters I'm supposed to look for.:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Don't we all love letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Trying to make a name for yourself is probably the worst thing that you can base drive on and every toy/writer wants to make their name big but you really have to love writing and love letters to appreciate anything in this "game". -meone http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthrea...40&pagenumber=8 *In2_thevoid, check out the thread above. If you haven't seen it before then you're in for a treat. Also, read every post. Some deep discussion going on... I don't mean to start shit with you but it looks like you're trying a bit too hard. Once again, I don't know for a fact that you have letters. Who knows, maybe you do. But if you're toy as me, you have to have a feel for letters before you try this shit. It might look apealing and "cool" to the toys in paperchase, otherwise... yeah. I smell a closing thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 23, 2004 Author Share Posted August 23, 2004 Originally posted by Yellow Feets http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthrea...40&pagenumber=8 *In2_thevoid, check out the thread above. If you haven't seen it before then you're in for a treat. Also, read every post. Some deep discussion going on... I don't mean to start shit with you but it looks like you're trying a bit too hard. Once again, I don't know for a fact that you have letters. Who knows, maybe you do. But if you're toy as me, you have to have a feel for letters before you try this shit. It might look apealing and "cool" to the toys in paperchase, otherwise... yeah. I smell a closing thread. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/fagflagrainbow1.gif'>http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/fagflagrainbow1.gif'>http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/fagflagrainbow1.gif'> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Why did you take that as a diss? I was just trying to help you out. And fag? You fucking have a "Hi Joker" tag above that piece of yours bro. Having a retarded .gif to respond to my shit is just as weak as that "style" of yours. Whatever. Keep that shit up. It's looking "mighty mad dope". :rolleyes: edit* If you think I'm "looking down" on you or whatever, I'm not. I'm (probably) on the same level you're on now. I'm just saying if you practiced letters as much as you are experimenting with that style, the results would be dope. If you want to shut me up, just post up some of your work. Right now you're looking mighty toy. Post up simples and shit. I'm not trying to come off as harsh and "net thuggish", just a simpke request. If you want to say something to me on a personal note, email me. powellpow2001@yahoo.com Yeah, I can tell this thread is about to get closed. Just post up more of your work in the meantime. Or we can argue some more. edit edit* I personally like what I see but I don't see the letters. I see "stuff" that looks like letters but I might be wrong. This is basically what I'm trying to say... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 I guess I'm a little confused because I'm not sure if it's a piece of yours you want me to critique, or a piece you did as a joke to poke fun of abstract styles (which is my guess by the way) or a piece you did for me. What are you looking for? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 love joker...its a love thing. see, actually, hes been trying to confess his undying love for you for some time now. nah. i like it. but, i cant do that. haha. wish i could. just not that fresh yet. back to the drawing boards for me.:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Originally posted by MLTf4nt0m love joker...its a love thing. see, actually, hes been trying to confess his undying love for you for some time now. nah. i like it. but, i cant do that. haha. wish i could. just not that fresh yet. back to the drawing boards for me.:) You see the new sig? Check mail. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rinse Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 even if that piece is supposed to be a joke its not funny... my goodness, how long did you slave over that one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some pittsburgh flavor Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 i'd recommend stopping this and trying something else. the only thing i can make out letter-wise is a tiny little R where it starts to slope down, and it's totally out of nowhere and doesn't work. the difference between what you're doing and what the real transcend kids are doing is you don't know what you're doing. look at your "letters". there is no definition between what you want the negative space or the positive space to be. it's a cluttered mess in the middle and all the awkward shit shooting off doesn't do it any justice either. if you look at ouija, joker, kema, you'll see that their pieces flow well and have identifiable letters. the other thing, you're using too many sketch marks and useless lines that throw your shit off. the transcend cats, from what i understand (at least with kema, ouija, joker) minimalize the amount of lines they use, often using '3-mile long' continuous lines that can make up several letters or what have you. make it more defined and use less extraneous shit so we can see what you are tryign to say. what you've got is really an unidentifiable blob of nonsense that's awkward and not aesthetically pleasing at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rize415 Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Originally posted by some pittsburgh flavor i'd recommend stopping this and trying something else. the only thing i can make out letter-wise is a tiny little R where it starts to slope down, and it's totally out of nowhere and doesn't work. the difference between what you're doing and what the real transcend kids are doing is you don't know what you're doing. look at your "letters". there is no definition between what you want the negative space or the positive space to be. it's a cluttered mess in the middle and all the awkward shit shooting off doesn't do it any justice either. if you look at ouija, joker, kema, you'll see that their pieces flow well and have identifiable letters. the other thing, you're using too many sketch marks and useless lines that throw your shit off. the transcend cats, from what i understand (at least with kema, ouija, joker) minimalize the amount of lines they use, often using '3-mile long' continuous lines that can make up several letters or what have you. make it more defined and use less extraneous shit so we can see what you are tryign to say. what you've got is really an unidentifiable blob of nonsense that's awkward and not aesthetically pleasing at all. i love you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 23, 2004 Author Share Posted August 23, 2004 Originally posted by StarzAbove Time for Closure i just hope joker doesnt drive a honda. :lick: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 ::cricket chirps:: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Green Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 that shit is fresh haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0RB1T0N3R Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 yeah man, ........i dont know what the fuck that shit says. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 24, 2004 Author Share Posted August 24, 2004 Originally posted by Al Green that shit is fresh haha i try... :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Green Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 ive looked at this drawing about 15 times now.. and anyone who doesnt think this shit is fucking fresh as hell.. is nuts. man! i tip my hat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 ^Your sarcasm is unreal. So I'm guessing the piece says Joker... :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 24, 2004 Author Share Posted August 24, 2004 Originally posted by Yellow Feets ^Your sarcasm is unreal. So I'm guessing the piece says Joker... :confused: :beat: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
s.urkaleeno Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 Originally posted by Al Green ive looked at this drawing about 15 times now.. and anyone who doesnt think this shit is fucking fresh as hell.. is nuts. man! i tip my hat. Looking at it as a drawing and not as a thumbnail for a future piece, it's still lacking. The first third is actually very nice, but it falls apart after that. There is nice line quality that is killed by mess in the middle. It's just to much of a jump to make. From that almost elagant line to that scribble, there needs to be a better transition to actually be considered "fresh as hell" and if your looking at it from graffiti stand point, there is no letter structure. But fuck it what do I know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 what are you guys talking about? that shit is simple as pie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Green Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 its not the freshest composition.. but it has more moments of interest then most of the canned ham i see people posting on here.. i still think its fresh as hell. regardless if i look at it as graffiti or just lines. reminds me of poesia. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swiffer Jet Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Originally posted by Al Green i still think its fresh as hell. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in2_thevoid Posted August 25, 2004 Author Share Posted August 25, 2004 Originally posted by in2_thevoid http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/joker.jpg'> the second letter is a 'G', i broke down the 'structure' for you. i just hope somebody can hear me. the cluster in the middle of every letter is what makes the letter whatever letter it is. because the shell the letter is in, is the same on every one.. so its like each letter is wearing a 'suit'. the letter after the 'G' is an 'E' hopefully after seeing the 'G' you will be able to see the 'E'. im not an art student, and my mother paid her friend to do all my highschool work, so i know im not smart, especially when it comes to 'negative space or the positive space'. BTW. ive thought up the first 3 letters before so i had an idea with where i was going with it. the last letter i just threw up lines because i didnt really know where i was going with it. you can tell i didnt put it in the same 'shell' the others are inside of. like i said. a nigguh is workin on it. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v125/thedarkages/Copyofjoker.jpg'> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymity Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Maybe you should darken the lines/erase whats not needed, very hard to tell what is going on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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