Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 OK. Ive done some sketching and come up with this. Is the lettering technique any better than my previous posts? http://artisdead.org/normaloutline1.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 its pretty wak but its still not horrific,,, you gotta tone down the mad arrows everywhere,,, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 whoa~ i dont like how you bent your n to make way for your arrows i like the m.. the r is to skinny drop a few arrows... good start:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 check out the other thread I posted. It has more of my usual stuff. I was just trying to take previous advice and see how I went. Oh well I guess you cant always get shit to work, thanks for the feedack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 Just check your consistancy, some pieces are really thick and some are very skinny, try to keep this at a happy medium. :P -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest eLcos Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 YOU SUCK DONT YOU KNOW YOU SUCK YOU ARE SO BAD WORK ON YOUR FUCKING BOOK OFF THE NET. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 EccE..... i think maybe you should do something more simple and then post it. leave out the whole "intersecting letters" thing. and some of those extra arrows, block lettering and pointy doodads are really unecessary. not to mention i would suggest you use guiding lines so you dont have irregular letters that are different shapes and sizes. that skinny/fat lettering is very disturbing. dont worry about impressing anyone by adding extra little things here and there....keep it simple yet stylish. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ser3adc Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 ^^^^ well said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted August 25, 2002 Share Posted August 25, 2002 try not to interconnect EVERY fucking letter. its played out and ugly as fuck asthetically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my moment Posted August 25, 2002 Share Posted August 25, 2002 3d would prolly help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
el nervo Posted August 26, 2002 Share Posted August 26, 2002 NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest curse Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 i like the circle on the ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonic Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 damn im feelin ya style....i dont know how thats wak it'll prolly burn mad heads on here wut ever lovin the peace would look dope with a fill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 Originally posted by el nervo NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 looks like something they would put in a video game haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aimsTOplease Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 LOL!!! whoever said no is funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted September 1, 2002 Share Posted September 1, 2002 http://www.bootyproject.org/images/games/jsrf/full/jsrf18.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amerika Posted September 1, 2002 Share Posted September 1, 2002 for real, just drop the arrows, they're played out...just get away from other sketchbooks and flicks for awhile, and think about how to add an original flare to your own shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest loser Posted September 1, 2002 Share Posted September 1, 2002 yeup, work on oringinallty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest seno.oner Posted September 1, 2002 Share Posted September 1, 2002 Originally posted by cheps Just check your consistancy, some pieces are really thick and some are very skinny, try to keep this at a happy medium. :p -A cheps why dont you try to apply that to what you do- you dumbass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceso One SAF Posted September 3, 2002 Share Posted September 3, 2002 http://www.geocities.com/sel_one/child_dam2.jpg'> your this good...............not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted September 3, 2002 Share Posted September 3, 2002 Man, that's not normal at all. :beat: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted September 4, 2002 Author Share Posted September 4, 2002 Damn! This is an old thread that I started and I cant believe that people still want to bitch about it. Seems like you get more responses if your shit. I have made an improvement since this post and have posted it under "a few blackook pieces" which was the original thread I started. If anything I would appreciate criticism on that thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SKER Posted September 4, 2002 Share Posted September 4, 2002 Originally posted by sonic damn im feelin ya style....i dont know how thats wak it'll prolly burn mad heads on here wut ever lovin the peace would look dope with a fill ARE YOU FUCKING RETARDED? U THINK THATS DOPE..I FIND IT FUCKING HORRIBLE!! FUKIN RETARDS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeYnO9 Posted September 8, 2002 Share Posted September 8, 2002 haha that is funny... there some kid from houston named sker? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted September 8, 2002 Share Posted September 8, 2002 Originally posted by seno.oner cheps why dont you try to apply that to what you do- you dumbass Im workin on it son ..... -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted September 8, 2002 Share Posted September 8, 2002 http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cdz Posted September 9, 2002 Share Posted September 9, 2002 garbage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the shitz Posted September 9, 2002 Share Posted September 9, 2002 get rid of arrows then repost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GASFACEDJEW Posted September 9, 2002 Share Posted September 9, 2002 THAT SHIT SUCKS YOU BIG TITTY BEYATCH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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