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any better?

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by EccE, Aug 23, 2002.

  1. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    OK. Ive done some sketching and come up with this. Is the lettering technique any better than my previous posts?
    [​IMG]
     
  2. FROSTY

    FROSTY Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2001 Messages: 2,248 Likes Received: 5
    its pretty wak but its still not horrific,,, you gotta tone down the mad arrows everywhere,,,
     
  3. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

    Joined: May 6, 2002 Messages: 1,072 Likes Received: 0
    whoa~

    i dont like how you bent your n to make way for your arrows i like the m.. the r is to skinny drop a few arrows... good start:D
     
  4. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    check out the other thread I posted. It has more of my usual stuff. I was just trying to take previous advice and see how I went. Oh well I guess you cant always get shit to work, thanks for the feedack
     
  5. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    Just check your consistancy, some pieces are really thick and some are very skinny, try to keep this at a happy medium. :p

    -A
     
  6. eLcos

    eLcos Guest

    YOU SUCK DONT YOU KNOW YOU SUCK YOU ARE SO BAD WORK ON YOUR FUCKING BOOK OFF THE NET.
     
  7. DorkstaR

    DorkstaR Senior Member

    Joined: May 24, 2002 Messages: 1,404 Likes Received: 0
    EccE.....

    i think maybe you should do something more simple and then post it. leave out the whole "intersecting letters" thing. and some of those extra arrows, block lettering and pointy doodads are really unecessary. not to mention i would suggest you use guiding lines so you dont have irregular letters that are different shapes and sizes. that skinny/fat lettering is very disturbing. dont worry about impressing anyone by adding extra little things here and there....keep it simple yet stylish. ;)
     
  8. Ser3adc

    Ser3adc Guest

    ^^^^

    well said.
     
  9. MrMajicMarkker

    MrMajicMarkker New Jack

    Joined: Jul 20, 2001 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    try not to interconnect EVERY fucking letter. its played out and ugly as fuck asthetically.
     
  10. my moment

    my moment Member

    Joined: Apr 23, 2002 Messages: 378 Likes Received: 0
    3d would prolly help
     
  11. el nervo

    el nervo Senior Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2002 Messages: 1,173 Likes Received: 0
  12. curse

    curse Guest

    i like the circle on the ?
     
  13. sonic

    sonic New Jack

    Joined: Mar 26, 2002 Messages: 24 Likes Received: 0
    damn im feelin ya style....i dont know how thats wak it'll prolly burn mad heads on here

    wut ever lovin the peace would look dope with a fill
     
  14. tears*uno

    tears*uno Guest

     
  15. WALE!pd

    WALE!pd 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Messages: 12,040 Likes Received: 364
    looks like something they would put in a video game haha
     
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