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Another drawing i did in class.

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by TheRedVoice, Sep 2, 2004.

  1. TheRedVoice

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    Another drawing i did in class.

    Discussion started by TheRedVoice - Sep 2, 2004

    product of doodling. some characters

    http://img18.exs.cx/img18/8968/kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.jpg'>

    ive never don characters, and havent drawn in a while..so heres a try, and sorry if the pic is hard to see

    And since i need to update this thread to keep it alive, i did this today..i had a highliter, and a reallydull pencil, and i drew this. i thought itd be interesting to try something different for once..i usually do really bland easy stuff, so look. and it says Mac...my name is Mclennard, but i got by mac

    [img]http://img10.exs.cx/img10/9572/gfgggffgggfffggggggffffffffffffffffffffffffff.jpg'>
     
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  2. bigf00t

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    bigf00t - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    Nice. Thats crazy.
     
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  3. yeaaaah baby

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    yeaaaah baby - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    i like it. got anymore?
     
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  4. TheRedVoice

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    TheRedVoice - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    nah man..actually, those are the first characters ive ever done, and i didnt really set on with a meaning for drawing them..it just kind of showed up, and i tried it out..but im gonna start working with characters
     
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    bigf00t - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    And you can help me learn how to do that.
     
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  6. TheRedVoice

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    TheRedVoice - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    im not really too sure how to do it yet anyway
     
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  7. bigf00t

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    bigf00t - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    Just show me some techniques. Ya know what I mean. Because your "Cool like Dat".
     
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    StarzAbove - Replied Sep 2, 2004

    I think its cool
     
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    bigf00t - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    It definetly is.
     
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    type R - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    its cool, but i dont know if one drawing deserves its own thread.

    keep updating this or something.
     
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    THE CORONER - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    yeah i mos def agree with that
    put that shit in the characters thread bro
     
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  12. TheRedVoice

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    TheRedVoice - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    there. i added something
     
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    Joker - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    Not bad on either drawing. To keep the thread alive though... I would suggest you continue to post more images.

    I have a few comments about your piece... because after all, you posted it for the world to see. That leaves you open for criticism, wanted or not. Because I like the piece overall and can see it has some flare, I wanted to add my visual thoughts to what I see...

    A- The top of the your letter "A" seems janky. Like you knew you had to do something up there to make the piece chunky as below but didn't really think it out. I think if you go back into it and make an effort to utilize the space to help the piece... it'll pay off.

    B & D - Now this is a pet-peeve of mine and not of 99% of the writing world, but I'm going to get into it anyway. Stuff coming from nowhere. These little extra things you have hanging off the edges of your piece... they're just there. Hanging on like a cold sore. Thy're only purpose is filler, which is fine. Though that filler should be coming from somewhere. One of the bars of the "M" and one of the bars of the "C". You know what I mean? Make them a part of the piece and not an accessory. This is something I always try to do. I can't expect everyone else to understand why it's that way for me, but it just is. Think of your piece as a machine. Every piece of a machine has a purpose. Nothing is added for filler.

    C - Maybe it's because it's in the center of the piece or maybe it's because I'm immediately drawn to the bad sections of pieces, but that left bar of your "A" is really holding that piece back. More so than any of the other stuff I mentioned. Either the "A" needs to shift to the right a little or you just need to lose that little jump-back thingie at the bottom of the right line in the "M". What do you think?
     
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    Joker - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    And one last comment...

    I don't think you should cut the right top of your "M" off like that with the bar from the "A". It seems forced.

    Sorry... I feel like i cut you apart now, but I have good intentions. Not dissing.
     
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    Flayed God X - Replied Sep 3, 2004

    yeah you need to get your simples down first redvoice. Your flow, placement, and form would benefit greatly from this.

    --->Joker you need to make some tips for the 3d pages :lol:
     
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