ames Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 im fairly new and just wanted to post a few to see if i could get feedback/criticism/advice. also, the last one isnt finished yet. thanks i apologize for the picture quality in advance.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
en0reks@d Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 you can't use that name kid that is a well known king in denver. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 ^What he said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 What if he is from a different country?? :huh2: :innocent: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Or maybe a different planet....:p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavyLox Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 since when does denver have kings Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Originally posted by heavyLox@Jan 5 2005, 03:24 PM since when does denver have kings Quoted post hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 i wanna stop being suck an ass, so i'll help out here: 1- dont outline your tags, it defeats the whole purpose of a tag. and practice with round letters, it gives more ideas and looks better too. i dunno why all these newbs always think graffit has stick letters with arrows. 2- work on letter structure, maybe you think youre past this or something, but letter structure is what its all about. like posted in every other thread, use the letters from your keyboard, download some fonts and play with them, draw them do whatever it takes till you feel yove mastered them and you can move on to more complex letters. most of this refers to the 2nd drawing. 3- theres nothing to say about that 3rd picture.. its alright, i like it, i dont see any letters in it though. 4- sorry to say, but those fingers look like garbage. work on the letter structure, dont make some bars thicker than others, make them ABOUT the same size, im not saying they should be perfect. 5- same rule applys here, dont make some bars thicker than others and make all the letters relatively the same height, dont let it slope down. i like that character though. :) 6- once again, im sorry, but that picture just looks like fresh ass. a: letters are too skinny for me b: letters are too square. c: not very rounded. overall, youre ALRIGHT for a newb, i cant lie, i started out the same way, but practice makes perfect some suggustiosn are to look through the battle thread, and other users threads, and look through the throwie thread for ideas. the throwies thread pulled through for me all the time. and oh yeah, those pants are a little too tight. : / Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 omg earo that was beautiful!..hehe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Originally posted by earo 35@Jan 5 2005, 03:08 PM i wanna stop being suck an ass, so i'll help out here: 1- dont outline your tags, it defeats the whole purpose of a tag. and practice with round letters, it gives more ideas and looks better too. i dunno why all these newbs always think graffit has stick letters with arrows. 2- work on letter structure, maybe you think youre past this or something, but letter structure is what its all about. like posted in every other thread, use the letters from your keyboard, download some fonts and play with them, draw them do whatever it takes till you feel yove mastered them and you can move on to more complex letters. most of this refers to the 2nd drawing. 3- theres nothing to say about that 3rd picture.. its alright, i like it, i dont see any letters in it though. 4- sorry to say, but those fingers look like garbage. work on the letter structure, dont make some bars thicker than others, make them ABOUT the same size, im not saying they should be perfect. 5- same rule applys here, dont make some bars thicker than others and make all the letters relatively the same height, dont let it slope down. i like that character though. :) 6- once again, im sorry, but that picture just looks like fresh ass. a: letters are too skinny for me b: letters are too square. c: not very rounded. overall, youre ALRIGHT for a newb, i cant lie, i started out the same way, but practice makes perfect some suggustiosn are to look through the battle thread, and other users threads, and look through the throwie thread for ideas. the throwies thread pulled through for me all the time. and oh yeah, those pants are a little too tight. : / Quoted post Now that Earo just wrote a fuckin rule book, basically just take your time and practice more before you start a thread for yourself. An idea to get criticism is to post in the TOYS POST HERE THREAD hence the name. Save your sketches and start a thread later on to show progression and to receive further credit! ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ames Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 sorry about posting that in the wrong section but thanks again for the help and i had no idea that the name was taken, my name is james and i just took off the J. but thanks again for the help, i appreciate it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gates Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 pick out letters you like and make a name out of them... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 bets way to do that i thort was to get letters u like say four letters like pams or summink n try and make an original werd from them like in there i just seen spam lol but it werks for me so why no help others and help ur self Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meatlocker Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 buy pants that aren't so tight? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ames Posted January 6, 2005 Author Share Posted January 6, 2005 has anyone seen 'noun' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 Nah, keep ames. Heavylox gave you the most important advice in this thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HECZONER Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 UMMM, YOUR PANTS ARE KINDA TIGHT... THEY PROBABLY SPLIT YOUR NUTS AND MAKE A CAMEL TOE, IM SURE YOUR HOMIES LIKE IT THO... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 hahah tight pants are gay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAL*LOVE*U Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 hahahaaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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