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AMESBOOK

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by ames, Jan 5, 2005.

  1. ames

    ames New Jack

    Joined: Jan 3, 2005 Messages: 31 Likes Received: 0
    im fairly new and just wanted to post a few to see if i could get feedback/criticism/advice. also, the last one isnt finished yet.
    thanks

    i apologize for the picture quality in advance..

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  2. en0reks@d

    [email protected] New Jack

    Joined: Oct 12, 2004 Messages: 12 Likes Received: 0
    you can't use that name kid that is a well known king in denver.
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  3. AerosolTerrorist

    AerosolTerrorist Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 443 Likes Received: 0
  4. WitE TrAsH

    WitE TrAsH Member

    Joined: May 1, 2004 Messages: 416 Likes Received: 1
    What if he is from a different country?? :huh2: :innocent:
     
  5. AerosolTerrorist

    AerosolTerrorist Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 443 Likes Received: 0
    Or maybe a different planet....:p
     
  6. heavyLox

    heavyLox Veteran Member

    Joined: Feb 2, 2002 Messages: 7,196 Likes Received: 17
    since when does denver have kings
     
  7. vare_one

    vare_one Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 31, 2004 Messages: 1,371 Likes Received: 1
  8. earo 35

    earo 35 Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 18, 2004 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 1
    hahaha
     
  9. earo 35

    earo 35 Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 18, 2004 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 1
    i wanna stop being suck an ass, so i'll help out here:

    1- dont outline your tags, it defeats the whole purpose of a tag. and practice with round letters, it gives more ideas and looks better too. i dunno why all these newbs always think graffit has stick letters with arrows.

    2- work on letter structure, maybe you think youre past this or something, but letter structure is what its all about. like posted in every other thread, use the letters from your keyboard, download some fonts and play with them, draw them do whatever it takes till you feel yove mastered them and you can move on to more complex letters. most of this refers to the 2nd drawing.

    3- theres nothing to say about that 3rd picture.. its alright, i like it, i dont see any letters in it though.

    4- sorry to say, but those fingers look like garbage. work on the letter structure, dont make some bars thicker than others, make them ABOUT the same size, im not saying they should be perfect.

    5- same rule applys here, dont make some bars thicker than others and make all the letters relatively the same height, dont let it slope down. i like that character though. :)

    6- once again, im sorry, but that picture just looks like fresh ass.
    a: letters are too skinny for me
    b: letters are too square.
    c: not very rounded.

    overall, youre ALRIGHT for a newb, i cant lie, i started out the same way, but practice makes perfect

    some suggustiosn are to look through the battle thread, and other users threads, and look through the throwie thread for ideas. the throwies thread pulled through for me all the time.

    and oh yeah, those pants are a little too tight. : /
     
  10. AerosolTerrorist

    AerosolTerrorist Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 443 Likes Received: 0
    omg earo that was beautiful!..hehe
     
  11. WitE TrAsH

    WitE TrAsH Member

    Joined: May 1, 2004 Messages: 416 Likes Received: 1
    Now that Earo just wrote a fuckin rule book, basically just take your time and practice more before you start a thread for yourself. An idea to get criticism is to post in the TOYS POST HERE THREAD hence the name. Save your sketches and start a thread later on to show progression and to receive further credit! ;)
     
  12. ames

    ames New Jack

    Joined: Jan 3, 2005 Messages: 31 Likes Received: 0
    sorry about posting that in the wrong section
    but thanks again for the help
    and i had no idea that the name was taken, my name is james and i just took off the J.
    but thanks again for the help, i appreciate it
     
  13. Gates

    Gates Member

    Joined: Apr 27, 2004 Messages: 922 Likes Received: 0
    pick out letters you like and make a name out of them...
     
  14. vare_one

    vare_one Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 31, 2004 Messages: 1,371 Likes Received: 1
    bets way to do that i thort was to get letters u like say four letters like pams or summink n try and make an original werd from them like in there i just seen spam lol but it werks for me so why no help others and help ur self
     
  15. meatlocker

    meatlocker Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 2, 2004 Messages: 228 Likes Received: 0
    buy pants that aren't so tight?
     
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