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Just some old flows I've had for years that I'll never put to work so I figured I might as well post em here. It's the most work their gonna see..

 

All unfinished and all have something to do with what was going on at the time, back when i was a little more wreckless then I am now, or am trying to be, so here's a peep into my average foundation

 

whats my life like? lemme tell you it aint right

settle the score in two ways, either mic or a knife fight

get you lit up quicker than a night light livin the night life

the white hype, strappin up cause its fight night

livin in the trenchs, snatch your girl and your necklace

claim you a player but only sit the benches

shit is hectic... i dont even got time to stress it

hit you so hard all you kids ell be born dyslexic

im wreckless, an used to be like fuck it

smokin weed an poppin e's used to be like nothin

so i started sellin the shit to make a little somethin

an now these other motherfuckers are actin like im frontin

you want the bread? then go out and earn your dough

no matter how many times i said it they never heard it tho

so you want in for what? a girl to hold in a convertable

remember the first ones to step up are the first to choke

don't waste your time fixin shit that aint broke so...

like az hopin those open an close cases never re-open

an even tho i got away clean hope the last case starts closin

 

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the illest to do this

and ill stand up to prove it

a genius on the mic take the beat and go to school with it

a flow like fluid kid others askin who is this?

im far from new to this, get off the stupid shit

think you got me figured out, the kid with a vicous mouth

that spit so hot, my tounge could dry a fuckin river out

one to switch it up when i hit em up in they ribs an guts

even with your chin tucked you wont be wakin up

keep you foldin like sheets just to make my ends meet

thats the way its gotta be, risky like armed robbery

fuck comradery always doin it for self

mistook your cd for a book the way it sits on the shelf

im bad faya health so fuck it its them or us

never been more carefull about who i can trust

lifes a gamble, its a given, takin chances a must

to realise how big this bet-tis like a head up with the bus

im troublesome who chew through emcees like bubblegum

an treat you like seatbelt the way ill make you buckle up

had enough? cause this is just the beginnin

grab the mic cord and leave you all hung like linen

now who's winnin? never sat around for clowns

an ive made gravity jelouse by the way i put it down

what now? nah still not ready to stop

now listen real close for when the beat drop

emotions through music an i know how to use it

i mistreat the beat when i speak like car keys the way i lose it

 

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this was just a story about a heist, it was about going to new york and switching plates from two of the same cars, so when one person reported theirs stolen, the cops would trace it to another persons with the stolen liscense plate that they didnt know got put on their car, while i drive the "legit" one back to ct, so I could pull off another heist with an untracable car for the time being in ct.

 

i got to new haven left my gloves on the pavement,

pulled my hat low made my way inside the station,

hearts racin, hate doin dirt in public places

hoody up head down, no cop could ever trace this,

left the car behind so no bashead could miss it,

walked up to the booth an got a one way ticket,

waitin for the next ride down to ny,

with two things on me an a plate on my side,

got on the metro an made sure to sit in the back,

triple checked my pockets an the shit in my back pack,

left the stolen whip on the block with the keys in it,

doors open still runnin, gone in like a minute,

yea first step finished now its onto the next,

with little while left i took a quick rest,

breathin easy just to ease the stress,

held my necklace an kissed the cross that rest on my chest,

put my head down closed my eyes got my shit together,

thought to myself soon imma pass this bad weather,

make it better whatever it takes to see brighter days,

got off grand central an its onto the subways,

made my way uptown, stopped real quick to eat,

five minutes later, i was back on my feet

back in the street, an packin my heat,

just incase i have to cook some of that beef,

i need a fast whip somethin i can crash with,

i seen a benz vision, with 2 on the dash kid,

thats it, took the door cracked it, jacked it

took about a minute to put to work what i practiced,

fact is? forget about a chase no cop can match this,

drove a couple blocks got out an switched the plates,

by the time the cops catch on ill be outta the state,

if anything theyll be out chasin the wrong car

 

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Somethin I wrote for my boys voicemail, when we got bored we used to sit around and write something up real quick an call the other one up an if they didn't answer we'd leave a verse on the message...

 

This was the second one, I can't find the others...

 

a second sumbission outta the blue without your permission

its the second edition so listin while im kickin

a lil rhyme that i wrote in no time

the flows fine while the lines so defined

i wanna be rollin dice in sicily

love is love wether you get none or you dissin me

its like a mystery how the flows flow you kiddin me?

i dont even really write its a given gift you was missin me

well im back... so grab a bat or cock a gat

robbin trains banks armored cars all of that

as a matter of fact i never left young buck

it was just a break so you had time to get your weight up

watch how i switch it up my crews pitbulls

yours? sittin ducks your fam wont miss you

so grab the tissues ill leave you spittin up ribs an stuff

cause its just that official now imma pick it up

 

so count with me

 

the flow is dispicable along with twice as nice

cause me without a mic is like miami without vice

chinese people without rice, religeon without christ

dark without light an summer days without nights

houses without mice, suits without ties

cops without nines our courts without lies

husbands without wives, shit without flies

a watch witout time or boxin without fights

in reality theres nothin you can do to stop us

thats what happens when you clashin with mobsters

ask hoffa... the detects? got nadda

catch me in nevada while your swimmin with lobsters

 

the same ones i got chillin in butter on my plate

while j-mills chicks orderin him another steak

so make no mistakes cause your fake with a given fate

and i hate to have to make your mom order another wake

so get your shit sorted out stretch out your mouths

cause the flow is nasty an goes well past 12 rounds

an dont even bother me with any that petty beefin shit

keep our names outta your mouth while you already eatin dick

shoot you in the calf so you wont have a leg to stand on

tellin me to relax man... when i am calm

an dont come back with no rhymes no lines no response

don't get mad at me cause somebody stole your box of tampons

i use the chrome the same way i use a comb

to push back the wig on the top of your dome

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An unfinished project consisting of me just usuing other peoples rhyme schemes, attitudes etc... just for play

 

jigga

 

i keep game in my wallet spit flames while yall swallow

a jigga induced flow so you can watch ya dame follow

stack chips to get rich, use paychecks to flip bricks

wether illegal or legit, homey just stack that shit

i wanna have money like vegas got chips

have trump sayin "damn wish i could afford that shit"

im out for the ice and cream i got diamond dreams

cause a little of my knowledge is a dangerous thing

the things i plan on acheivin aint nothin easy

an you only live one life so please believe me

you want a track master? then read the cd

yall cant see me if i was stuck on the tv

 

jadakiss

 

i only sit on rims that are 20 an above

cause they so old they could get drunk in a club

 

canibus

 

ill battle you with a broken neck after a car wreck

an get upset cause you havent left yet

what you expect switchin my flows on ya cassete deck

and creep through the wires just to snuff you through the headset

you can find me on the net earasin the traces of your past occupations

so social care an welfare applications result in disqualifications

you ride the bus im gettin around through modern day communications

while you at your boys house playin the fuckin playstation

im so veristile every rhymes worth your while

cause i spit so serious that it hurts to smile

i got more styles then there are inchs along the nile

 

 

nature

 

alotta people think they got somethin to say

i shrug it off as childs play before i tuck it away

learned not to speak my mind at a young age

 

from day one ive been out to better myself

 

an keep thinks hot like rockin a sweater june

this is why im better than you im on my way to bein a veteran soon

few make it this far guns a filled to kill

spill yours guts an you can get your guts spilled

its the way shit happens i dont plan on makin it rappin

im more realistic than that

 

cormega

 

act like you the hardest cause me an marksman

we dont have enemys we got friends and targets

used to stack dough on the streets but now im straight

to see any of my money you gon have to rob a bank

an that shit is insured so you aint hurtin me

aN i dont have to pull the trigger thats left to security

im white so i moved on to legal hustles

while you runnin around gettin stuck cause you got see through muscles

im much smarter then you an yea once i got stuck up

i done came up hustlin weed an es while you was stuck on the same stuff

all that did was make me step my game up

 

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this is some shit when i was tryin to stop sellin an shit, alotta people wanted to get at me cause I was makin alotta money at the time, I'm white an that didn't help, but anyways without going into specific events, heres this... its all jumbled, never got put together

 

i did this with no equipment no studio an no nothin

but ive overcome it, rose above it, with somethin to show from it

an no matter where you walk someone will judge it (yup)

smarten up an you can get shit done without a budget (so fuck it)

its like i never even wrote these rhymes (nope)

i just closed my eyes and then i traced the lines

fuck plottin crimes an facin time my goal is to get up

an give my boys a real reason for once to keep they heads up

never let up, always smile even if your on your way down

if there was 1 person breathin down your neck theres 8 now

 

damn, thats when i put both of these hands to work

thats when i started thinkin so hard godman it hurt

about how am i gonna get up outta my current situations

my third felony im facin fuck i still got open cases

an im not even stressin this shit your missin the message kid

a humble man

 

turnin water to wine

through the steps ive walked im not lyin

ive overcame odds a veteran gambler shakes his head at

 

to change my fate to a humble man from an enemy of the state

 

thats cool with me its not even an issue son

go outta your way to pop shit and thats when your tissue runs

that red river life but tonight its the color of death

so weak if your head was underwater you wouldnt have the strength hold your breath

a beat like this could humble the hardest man

 

if some asked me whats my life like? id tell em you wouldnt want to live it

so when it almost got took believe me i wouldnt have missed it

 

do you know what its like when everyone wants to get at you?

 

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This one was about my mindstate at a particular time in life, around 16-17. I got the last part which was added not too long ago from someones quote on here, i forget whose it was...

 

through highschool played the lowkey role

try to stay on my toes to hit em with the okey doke

used to blow weed smoke an started my affiliations

when a philly was the only blunt but now a phillys nathan

i feel hes fakin, im waitin for him to fuck up

ill get him smashed in the back of a company dumptruck

musta been dumb luck, im waitin to catch this dude slippin

when im the one tryin to step on people but comin up missin,

whats my position? stand firm or bust guns like sperm?

cause one of us aint leavin until the barrel on this gun burn

im unconcerned, about the outcome of this situation

but in the end it was a fuckin felony id be facin

i fell hard for that shit once tho, but never again

 

A girl calls and asks, "Does it hurt very much to die?"

i told her "yes, if pain is the essence of death"

the feeling of death is an ox... sliding across your neck,

the feeling of a slug, burnin the flesh, inside of your chest,

the feeling of a knife, slippin inside of your breast,

how sweet the air is when your tastin your last breath.

 

 

I got more shit but these are just the ones I'm not doing anything with at the moment, their a few years old...

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"an dont even bother me with any that petty beefin shit

keep our names outta your mouth while you already eatin dick"

 

Your speaking what you think and not what you know...

 

I didn't start this thread to showcase your ignorance, it's more for people like me to relate, an to get some shit seen that would not have been otherwise

 

Go be an internet thug somewhere else, I'm unconcerned about you or you opinion, I'm suprised you actually took your head out of your fuckin ass long enough to speak up tho... movin on up...

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It's funny how Marlboro Red criticizes iCEBERG for writing about things that are sketchy and most likely didn't happen.

 

Well for one thing, I seriously doubt Marlboro is from NYC.

If he is, chances are he's some pussy kid that's afraid to leave his house, and thus has plenty of time to go on his computer all day to talk shit to people.

 

Don't worry... I notice my hypocrasy, but hey, he was the asshole first.

 

At least iCEBERG shows a little talent and creativity, and the unadulterated BALLS to show it to an online community.

He has won my respect.. I like the shit he wrote.

 

As for Marlboro, hold your fuckin tounge.

You've made yourself a target.

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*edited cause i just realized who i was tryin to explain myself too, anyways you dont need to know me like that, im not tryin to expose myself, just give you a peek

 

but

 

believe me or not everything except the heist one about goin to new york to get the car etc.. all have truth to em but whatever, i just gave you an example take it or leave it. im not interested in impressing any of you really just lettin you peek into my life through more then hollow comments and witty replies

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Originally posted by iCEBERG

An unfinished project consisting of me just usuing other peoples rhyme schemes, attitudes etc... just for play

 

jigga

 

i keep game in my wallet spit flames while yall swallow

a jigga induced flow so you can watch ya dame follow

stack chips to get rich, use paychecks to flip bricks

wether illegal or legit, homey just stack that shit

i wanna have money like vegas got chips

have trump sayin "damn wish i could afford that shit"

im out for the ice and cream i got diamond dreams

cause a little of my knowledge is a dangerous thing

the things i plan on acheivin aint nothin easy

an you only live one life so please believe me

you want a track master? then read the cd

yall cant see me if i was stuck on the tv

 

jadakiss

 

i only sit on rims that are 20 an above

cause they so old they could get drunk in a club

 

did you say those were their style patterns? and you wrote the lyrics in their pattern? or are those their lyrics to and then you did yours down below in that later post...?

 

i like that donald trump reference in tha jigga flow, and tha jadakiss one is sick to...

 

holla:king:

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Nah i just did it kinda like... if you listen to someone you get a feel for how they carry themselves you know what i mean?

 

An I was just givin myself a break, kinda like breakin away from my usual flow to like... stylize... a verse after whoever. I didnt finish that jada one, that was the last verse i was gonna do but never got around to finishing it.

 

Anyways I'm takin off for the day, if I can dig up more shit somewhere I'll post it. Gimme a few months an we'll have demos an everything, we'll not even demos full cd's cause we're not lookin for a record deal, I don't even really write, we're gonna do everything ourselves from promotion to distribution etc...

 

We've all been around and have got shit to show for it along with things to add, I don't even really write, maybe like once a month if that an most of those were over specific beats, they carry real well over the beats you can't pick up on it through just text, your missin out on the delivery etc...

 

But anyways yea me an my boy are pullin our shit together to help out the rest of our boys. You probably won't here me on any of the shit, maybe a verse here or there, I'm more of a behind the scenes dude, I'm not as interested as making my own cd as I am putting out and marketing their shit but yea, in a little bit, if I'm still around I'll drop the website or whatever for you to check everyone out at...

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another one I found that I wrote when I was recoverin from an accident and got to sit back for awhile and see everyday things from a different perspective, kinda like watching certian shit that happened to you on a t.v.

 

never finished it, never cleaned it up etc... like a rough draft

 

the way things been goin got me thinkin recently/

now i easily see when people try sneakin me/

i cease to sleep my mind chews on problems like the weakest meat/

i now dine on knowledge cause for me its just feast to eat/

emotions released in beats most souls hidden beneath the feet/

you were supposed to be close to me watch the lies retreat/

my mind is a weapon, used at my discretion/

an its almost at perfection while my wisdoms manifestin/

listen to this lesson, i teach like no other/

when it comes down to it i am my only brother/

ya see the things ive seen an people that ive talked to/

why explain youll only go around what ive already walked through/

think about it...

 

okay now lets say we take all emotion away/

that would be like having no sun in the middle of the day/

are you catchin on yet? am i over your head?/

the saddest part of all this is your mentally dead/

so instead im gonna try a different approach/

think of me not as your friend but more like a coach/

showin you the ropes clarity wisdom and propserity/

while chances are your probably not even try to hear me/

how to open your mind, heal your own wounds/

ive done it a thousand times and now i see the truth/

its the best of weed, purest form of ecstacy/

got you thinkin all this just by standin next to me/

...

 

i see through guys by lookin through eyes/

to eventually aviod the whole concept that of which is true lies/

so now lets say the average person wasnt allowed to think/

true everyone has thoughts but they arent the same thing/

your influenced for one reason or another, your manipulated/

seein life through thoughts subject to outside stimulation/

see writins kinda like a therapy serious or even parody/

it makes truth shine through an reality now appears to me/

i now realize the truth when i see real lies/

while most are speakin on life they've seen through sealed eyes/

i think much harder smarter an deeper than you/

but still get caught up in shit just like a sneaker do/

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COFFEE, OJ, TWO ENGLISH MUFFINS, AND AN ATTITUDE!

 

Originally posted by S@T@N

It's funny how Marlboro Red criticizes iCEBERG for writing about things that are sketchy and most likely didn't happen.

 

Well for one thing, I seriously doubt Marlboro is from NYC.

If he is, chances are he's some pussy kid that's afraid to leave his house, and thus has plenty of time to go on his computer all day to talk shit to people.

 

Don't worry... I notice my hypocrasy, but hey, he was the asshole first.

 

At least iCEBERG shows a little talent and creativity, and the unadulterated BALLS to show it to an online community.

He has won my respect.. I like the shit he wrote.

 

As for Marlboro, hold your fuckin tounge.

You've made yourself a target.

 

PENIS, LET ME SCHOOL YOU ON A COUPLE OF POINTS BEFORE I HOP IN THE SHOWER AND RINSE OFF THE PAST... FOR ONE THING, YOU SHOULD FUCKING LEARN TO SPELL... SECOND OF ALL, IF YOU REALLY THINK NEW YORK CITY IS SO FUCKING AWESOME AND EXOTIC THAT SOMEONE WOULD HAVE TO SIGN ON TO A COMPUTER AND FRONT LIKE THEY LIVE THERE, THEN YOU MUST HAVE A REALLY SAD LIFE...

 

IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT iCEHERB TRIED TO WRITE SOME HALF-ASS LAUGHABLE BOOTLEG BULLSHIT FANTASY BARS ABOUT SHIT HE NEVER DID, AND IT'S EVEN MORE NOT MY FAULT THAT HE DECIDED TO PLAY HIMSELF BY PUTTING THEM ONLINE SO PEOPLE LIKE ME COULD TAUNT HIM WITH HIS OWN INSECURITIES...

 

AND F.Y.I. BIG BUY, I LEAVE MY HOUSE EVERY SINGLE FUCKING DAY, MATTER OF FACT I'M GOING TO BOUNCE FOR WORK IN ABOUT A HALF HOUR... SEE YOU CHUMPS WHEN I GET THERE!

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Know your right?

 

Nah I'm savin myself the aggrivation of trying to explain myself to you you fuckin dork

 

See I'm smarter then you, if i were to keep on "riffing" with you, thats what you'd want so you could go on some bullshit

 

So keep runnin around quoting other people you fuckin dickrider, I get mine you fuckin faggot

 

I'm done with this petty back an forth bullshit, go play somewhere

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Originally posted by iCEBERG

Know your right?

 

Nah I'm savin myself the aggrivation of trying to explain myself to you you fuckin dork

 

See I'm smarter then you, if i were to keep on "riffing" with you, thats what you'd want so you could go on some bullshit

 

So keep runnin around quoting other people you fuckin dickrider, I get mine you fuckin faggot

 

I'm done with this petty back an forth bullshit, go play somewhere

 

"AGGRAVATION" FOR STARTERS... AND EVEN AS YOU SAY THIS YOU'RE RESPONDING TO ME... LOL, SO WHAT'S YOUR POINT YOU CHEESY HOMOTHUG...?

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blah blah blah blah

 

show me somethin

 

an besides you talkin about me bitin lines? an i said yea sometimes you say somethin some else has

 

yea well you said...

 

You :

 

"im hungry so im off to the arches to get some fries,

an since im a balla shot calla i get my meal supersized"

 

50 Cent :

 

"your better off with them stupid guys, lookin for a coupe to drive,

nigga you ain't gettin nothin... but your french fries supersized"

 

damn... what are the chances of that? thats some shit...

 

but anyways since you got banned i edited this shit so you could read it, an im not bumpin it cause nobody wants to hear this shit, its for you, cause i know you still hangin around, im not worried about etch, we both heard what he had to bring to the table ...

 

:lol:

 

but whatever, read my shit again, you actin like im rappin like your boy 50, 2 of them i did just to do it, an the heist one was one of the two.

 

yea anyways, i didnt put em on here so i could maybe convince yall i was a gangsta or some shit. what the fuck is that man? c'mon dude, you cant be serious...

 

you think thats why i put this on here?

why? cause you think like that

 

you turnin all this into a joke you can market to people, i dunno why... so people laugh an you feel good about yourself? but... it worked, it worked, ill give you that, ill probably see you around again tho, talkin shit. untill you weasel back in with a different personality...

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heres another, i just wrote last night, since you all know people are runnin around sayin this an that, like im tryin to potray myself as somethin other then me

 

anyways, here it is, another somethin for people to stick their noses in, an say whatever, but i worte this to try to live up to, what most already think im tryin to live up to

 

notice its not like any of my other shit...

 

I wanna see so much money that we gettin at shows

that ill get my house painted just to match my cloths

i could open up a bakery with all my dough

with like 3 bikes i use, to holla at hoes

see i gotta plan an im gonna put it to work

cause my boys starvin like me so bad it hurts

find a wifey, i could buy gucci bags an skirts

an when i get sick the doctor sends a fine ass nurse

go fishin with my man on yachts with drop tops

an a burgandy lotus lookin hot in the parkin lot

an i really couldnt care less is you spark or not

the only problem i got, is where to park the yacht

so just stop, cause you already made way for us

an a little bit of my knowledge is dangerous

like im worried about people tryin to throw flames at us

the same dudes that couldnt get a flame to combust

ill throw you in a lake if you fuckin with my mission

an watch you sink like that thing in the middle of my kitchen

yea i stopped freestylein, an writin for a minute

but me without a pen is like popeye without spinach

so stop your bitchen, before mill gets you punched in your lip

then we head home to get dome an retire another bitch

be in the finest restuarants at like 1/4 to 8

talkin about money matters while im orderin steak

see... good things dont come to dudes that wait

be like me an take the shit then order another plate

an dont try to push my buttons like a remote control

cause i only buy guns come with smokin holes

thatll put a hole in your foot so big i gotta hold my nose

an ell turn your new nikes into open toes

see you wont like me when im nice imagine when im pissed

ill get you wrapped up like a christmas gift

gotta duck a snitch cause your boys turnin bitch

while the only thing my homeys know is how to plead the fifth

 

anybody could act like that, anybody could write like that, so i guess all im doin is livin up to peoples expectations, there you go

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honestly

 

all that is years old except for that last one

 

i did that... i dunno just to do, it, kinda like the i am whatever you say i am mentallity

 

but yeah, drop me a line, i dont even write really, i barely do, i got my boys in the field doin their shit

 

but yea, thats just some bullshit i play with to pass the time, my boys do it like its a 9 to 5 so trust me, their shit is tight, anyways if you want leave me someway to get in touch with you if you want and ill get at you this way, those are just words, they dont do the emotion and delivery justice, but like i said get at me, we're always open to go anywhere to make the right moves, so...

 

if you got aim lemme know ill get at you, ill be on for the next couple hours, after i hit you on aim you cant just edit the name out

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Originally posted by iCEBERG

 

if you got aim lemme know ill get at you, ill be on for the next couple hours, after i hit you on aim you cant just edit the name out

 

cool..only thing is im at work right now and this firewall blocks all that good shit. im lucky i can even get on 12oz.

 

hit me up on 'avils1@graffiti.net' and i'll get at you, explain a bit more bout this shit we're trying to hook up.

 

peace.

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Originally posted by avils

 

cool..only thing is im at work right now and this firewall blocks all that good shit. im lucky i can even get on 12oz.

 

hit me up on 'avils1@graffiti.net' and i'll get at you, explain a bit more bout this shit we're trying to hook up.

 

peace.

 

alright man, ill get at you...

 

*edit

 

just did... but yea my fault i gotta take off just get at me an well figure somethine out, see exactly what eachothers workin with but untill then take it easy

 

talk good about me, talk bad about me, just talk about me

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I only read half of the first post but I liked them......I am kinda like you in way when it comes to rhyming...I always write them and freestyle but I can never be fucked putting them into a song....Just the beers and freestyles on a mirophone for fun type. Most of my other friends are nutty about the shit ....They will go out of there way to get a song done and win freestyle comps and shit they have forgotten why the first started rhyming...TO HAVE FUN.......

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