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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by bathoræ, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. bathoræ

    bathoræ Member

    Joined: Jun 12, 2003 Messages: 529 Likes Received: 0
    hmm so this is the second piece I've ever done. It's not that great and I can see some stuff that was screwed up because of impatience, but critique your hearts out...

    [​IMG]
     
  2. mr_president

    mr_president Banned

    Joined: Nov 19, 2002 Messages: 5,691 Likes Received: 0
    you and my boy blink should battle.

    :lol:
     
  3. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

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  4. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    whats it say?! bathorae?? you should go a little simpler so you can see the letters, and i would make them the same size and hieght and width and all that shit.. and i wouldnt make 2+ unattatched bars make 1 letter, at least not yet..

    not TOO bad... but you got some work to do, as do i...:eek:
     
  5. bathoræ

    bathoræ Member

    Joined: Jun 12, 2003 Messages: 529 Likes Received: 0
    Thanks for the serious feedback. I'm trying to get to the point where I'm doing at least one outline per day, but I'm a busy girl so it's rough...
    Initially, I was going to leave it at an outline, but I had some time on my hands and figured I'd take my chances...


    And tease, tell your boy blink to bring it on... especially since I couldn't battle my way out of a wet paper bag...
     
  6. icsvirus619

    icsvirus619 New Jack

    Joined: Aug 21, 2002 Messages: 41 Likes Received: 0
    are u a good looking girl?
     
  7. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0

    thats some funny shit.

    and.. you are a girl?? neat.

    but yeah most the time i ever see critique on this forum its always people saying 'go simpler'.. i read one where someone said to learn how to DRAW the letters first... and its a good point, just do everyhting in bars first... then you can add little shit as you go along, it doesnt take much time to get the hang of it... i [email protected]
     
  8. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
    I like the coloring blends would make it iller but the letter structure is BAD
     
  9. bathoræ

    bathoræ Member

    Joined: Jun 12, 2003 Messages: 529 Likes Received: 0
    No, definately not. I'd say I'm your typical internet heifer with no purpose in life, destined to spend the rest of my days either alone or with some three-toothed inbred on a farm (maybe this blink dude... if pres will hook it up...).
    Not to brag or anything, I know there's chicks out there like me who couldn't even get that far... :D

    I agree with going simpler, and in fact expected it. Sometimes you can't help jumping ahead of yourself...
     
  10. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    yeah, i always jump ahead of myself...always... im stupid for it too... but hey its ok sometimes im satisfied... im only trying to please myself right?? well, i guess i just dont want a completely ugly style either..


    you got AIM or anyhting? howdybillybobjoe <---me
    im a 47 year old male from oregon who sits on his computer all day doing nothing but still gets a massive amount of back sweat.... i wish!
     
  11. Scrabble

    Scrabble Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2003 Messages: 735 Likes Received: 0

    haha, yes it was a good point wasnt it:cool:

    but thats basically all you can say at first, when they do that and come back, THATS when you get all into the technical shit.

    thats basically the case here. I can see the letters, but the is bad structure.
     
  12. BETELGEUSE

    BETELGEUSE Member

    Joined: Jan 31, 2002 Messages: 250 Likes Received: 18
    I think this lady is trying to use Jedi Mind tricks on yall... Girl you know you are fly!! Keep on practicing and your letters will come around forsure...Not too bad for your second piece.... and Thanks again for all of those labels...Rock on with your bad self......


    Haloe5000!!!.......
    505 desert crew....
     
  13. mr_president

    mr_president Banned

    Joined: Nov 19, 2002 Messages: 5,691 Likes Received: 0
    ummm what?

    seriously though, yalls style looks mad similiar...

    BATTLE OF THE WACKNESS IT IS!!!
     
  14. l0rdka0s

    l0rdka0s Banned

    Joined: Dec 31, 2002 Messages: 8 Likes Received: 0
    look here yougin tease isa moronic excuse for a human being and he knows this, and my shit looks nothing like your shit and vice versa and if we battled on paper id burn you really bad, tease as well... yes you heard. I been throwing skethces down for 9 fucking years no lie. dont make me go crazy and hafta go back to jail...
     
  15. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 4, 2002 Messages: 1,128 Likes Received: 0
    maybe try getting your letters to have the same width would help you with flow
     
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