yeah...no. if you're going to jock cliche graffiti, at least jock good cliche graffiti. at least you're sketching though. try to avoid arrows, try to avoid connecting your letters, and learn handstyles beffore you try to learn outlines. I recommend picking a handstyle you like by someone else, copying it over and over again until you start to understand what makes the lines crisp, and the shapes relevant, then steal the things you liek about it, and make a word out of what you've got. and don't paint anything until you meet someone else who paints regularly who says they wouldn't go over your stuff on sight. and don't start a crew. and quit painting pictures of shoes. and definitely don't give up, if you like it. no matter how much anybody hates. because they're definitely going to hate. people hate you when you suck, and hate you more when you get better. a lot of people just plain hate. so in closing, keep sketching, don't paint, start biting people until you develop style, and don't get mad when you get hated on.