advice
hey, im kinda new to graff you could say, ive been writing for a few months, maybe 4 and i have been reading this forum for a bit now, anyway i stumbled across this thread so i threw something together the other day in class with a pencil while i was bored and was wondering if i could get any advice on it, what i did wrong or what you dont like about it so i can improve,and to see what you all think, thanks.
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