pick up your fucking cans.
You need to work on your ability to control your hand's movement. The style you are going for is a style where all the bars on all the letters should be the same size. Theres a bunch of differently sized bars throughout that piece, and I'm looking from a fucked up angle. if you want I can put that in photoshop and mark all the spots I can see.
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cool i know theres alot of different sized letters.....but whatever.....if yah feel yah need to photoshop it go ahead....and yeah.....that is all....ohh and when i started this it was way more wild.....i just simpled it down.....didnt need extra.....heres a diff flick of it....