Akshun

well first off you definitely dont want feedback from any of these kids that come on this thread. 90 percent of the kids that ur gonna get feedback from ARE worse than you are. that blue piece that you did is actually not to bad. the only thing i dont like about it is the lines and shit that you put in there just to take up the negative space. its not that i dont like it, cause you do have the right idea, i just dont like how you didnt somehow connect them to your letters. the next time you do a piece like that try to connect that shit to your letters somehow that way you dont just have stray lines going every which way. and your hands are a little too basic. a nice little trick to gettin your hands better is to practice them in cursive. but dont do basic english cursive, add your OWN funk to your shit, whatever YOURE feelin at the time. and dont be pointy with your letters whatever you do cause that looks wack as fuck. make your hands flow together and look effortless. use capitals and lowercase letters here and there also. but make it all flow together. and dont put crowns, question and exclamation points, underlines, or quotations around your shit. its just toy. if theres anything else you need feedback on ill be glad to help seeing everyone else in pittsburgh is either wack or a dick.

wow... stop it... if there is ANYONE in the burgh thats actually got some style please show these children WHY their shit is terrible. freak, cruel, and whoever else is posting in this thread please check your shit at the front door cause youre just giving yourselves an early grave on the streets wit that shit. youre just making yourselves look like assholes posting shit thats wack. but i cant stop you from postin shit so go right ahead.

Royce Da 5'9 - Death Is Certain

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that wild style peice was hurt to say the least... it would have helped if either one of them knew how to dip into some wildstyle shit... sers the shit is nice and clean but youre just stayin on the same ol same ol shiatt... im not hatin or anything but yinz are actin like his shit is groundbreaking... mad props sers... just dont see the hype... nah mean?

Not at all.

heres a couple things from my boys adecer and deft that they drew up when they were all fucked up over my place... http://www.imageshack.us/img2/975/2004_0319Image7.JPG'> http://www.imageshack.us/img2/4649/2004_0325Image7.JPG'> http://www.imageshack.us/img2/1671/2004_0319Image8.JPG'> check out them hands too... they are both sick fuckin writers

CASE i think them are pretty phat if you ask me... oh and to whoever is writing OK you might as well give up that name and look for something different... there was i think 4 people that i know of that started writing OK... just in my area.... thats pretty sad... but hey if no one in your area is writing it then i say go for it but if i was you i would change it to OKAY or OKOK or OK ONE or something like that... dont just do the regular old OK but definitely use them letters for a 2 letter throwup... you can make some sick ass shit wit them letters if you use your head... believe me... ive seen plenty of phat OK stuff